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Sequel to Apologies, my story about Rainbow Dash breaking Pinkie's heart told in letter format.
Years after, once everything is all said and done, Pinkie receives the letter. But there's a note tucked inside with a few words that make her realize what really happened and why she received that letter.

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sounds super sad. um.....happy in the end or should i not read? PM me if you don't want the spoiler in your comments

i was really truely crying buy the end:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:
thats sooooooooooooooo sad now you need to make another story about pinkie coming to see dashie some realy emotional crap and rainbowdash makes it through and they get married and all that

I noticed this still says incomplete, so will there be more to this story?

Do as pooch says! Stat! It cant end with that statement. Have them in the same hospital or something! It cant end like that! Please? :pinkiesad2:

Whoop de do. Seriously, this stuff isn't original anymore. Its just irritating.

Mabye there doesn't need to be a corny ending. This is life for you. Heaven and hell.

So sad... :raritycry:

The story is very good! And I'll be waiting for continuation.
I still hope that in the end there will be sort of a happy ending for these two. :pinkiesad2:

Why does everyone assume it's a post portem story? Nowhere does it say she is dead. It may hint at it, but no confirmation. I think the series should end here just to piss you buggers off. :D


*loljk

Whew! No Romeo and Juliet ending today!

what is in the vial? i dont know if you are implying it is something, but i cant figure it out

@Dralen just some vague poison stuffs.:moustache:

You know why I peruse the "Sad" section of this site? I do it so I can find brilliant, outstanding pieces like this. Both this and the prequel were just that: brilliant, outstanding, and marvellously written. You've done a random Brony you don't know proud, Mate, and I'm sure you've done the same to every soul who read this. Bravo! Bravo!

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heyo best friend great job with your story:pinkiehappy:

I usually avoid tragedy stories, this and the prequel, but I was hoping the story woudl end right before Pinkie woke up.

I'm guessing this ist he end of this little saga, I don't hate sad endings, but I prefer happy ones. Nonetheless this and the first story get a like from me, but not a favorite, this isn't something I'm going to want to read again.

755614 Just because it's not original anymore doesn't mean it can't be good.

Sorry if sound like an utter moron but... the last few lines confused me a bit. I know that when Dash "woke up" it was an illusion but when it said,

"A tear fell from her eye as she glanced towards the vial beside her. She carefully tucked it back into the small bag it had come from.
She didn't need it anymore."

I was kinda confused. :unsuresweetie: Does she relise that Dash might wake up soon or feel that she can't end here or... what? I'm again sorry if it's obvious but.. i hope you can clear it up for me! Thanks!:twilightsheepish:

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Honestly? I'm glad you asked.. Pinkie sort of realizes that she shouldn't let it end like that, kwim? :raritywink:

Oh ok.. that makes alot more sense.. thank you! :twilightsmile:

WOAH!!!!????? IS PINKIE GONNA KILL HERSELF??????
OMFG :rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::raritydespair::pinkiesad2:

Continue!! Have Dashie wake up and have them live happily ever after!! Please?

Happy 11th Anniversary!

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