Stories set in the Oversaturated World, some silly, some less so.
"Got a secret, can you keep it?" Sunshine Smiles sang, a serene smile on her face as her eyes became blacker than black. "Swear this one you'll save. Better lock it, in your pocket, taking this one to the grave~"
The unicorn aspect continued to walk around the fidgeting boy, that same smile on her face even as he started sweating. "If I show you, then I know you won't tell what I said. 'Cause two can keep a secret, if one of them is dead~" A barely heard melody faded away as Sunshine finished her song, still smiling brightly as her eyes returned to their normal lime-green. Smoothing her turquoise dress, she turned back to the boy and raised her eyebrow at him. "We have an understanding, then?"
"Y-yeah," he stuttered, gulping and sweating as his eyes darted around. Sunshine's smile did nothing to soothe him, especially when she leaned toward him. "I-I promise, I won't tell about this!"
"Good!" Sunshine replied, as chipper as ever, and held out a hand for him to shake. "Just one more thing to do~" She continued to smile, her hand waiting for the boy's.
Gulping audibly again, the boy gingerly took her hand, and almost cried out when their hands were both enveloped in darkness. It only lasted a moment though, and Sunshine was already pulling away by the time his mind had processed what had just happened.
"Remember, it's a secret~," she singsonged. "I'll know if you don't keep your promise~."
The boy nodded, taking a step back, then another, then he quickly turned and took off at a sprint, leaving the smiling girl in his wake.
Sunshine Smiles giggled as she turned away, happily skipping away herself, only to be stopped when she found another unicorn aspect in her way. "Oh! Hey sis~" Sunshine grabbed her older (by a few minutes) twin sister in a hug, while the blueish-grey girl just stood there. "What's up?"
"Was that really necessary?" Moonlight Raven asked, her voice a flat monotone that contrasted her sister's in much the same way everything about her did.
"I always hug my big sister~"
"That's not what I meant, and you know it." Moonlight looked past Sunshine, just barely able to see the boy still running away in fright. "You didn't have to do that to him."
"Oh, silly sis," Sunshine giggled, booping Moonlight on the nose. "Of course I did. I can't have Sunset showing up and ruining things for me." She... didn't stop smiling, but her eyes still seemed to narrow in a glare. "You remember your promise too, don't you?"
Moonlight simply raised an eyebrow. "I remember, Sunshine. I won't tell her what you're up to."
"Good!" Sunshine was already back to being traditionally happy, skipping along the sidewalk. "Lets go get some lunch, Sis. My treat!"
Moonlight watched her sister skip along for a moment, before fingering the copy of Sunset Shimmer's Icon in her pocket. I promised I wouldn't tell her what you were up to, Sunshine, she thought, but that's all I promised I wouldn't tell her.
For those unfamiliar with Exalted, breaking an oath sealed by an Eclipse Caste Solar Exalt results in the subtle retribution of the heavens at the worst possible time. Breaking one of Sunshine's is presumably a bit more... direct.
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I feel it might be a bit disingenuous and dishonest to not show the thing that both inspired this short, and serves as the source of Sunshine's little hex/curse/spell/oath.
What's the Abyssal counterpart's name, again? And rather ironic she's called Sunshine, ain't it?
Either way, she's a real threat if an Exalted equivalent. They were made to kill Titans, after all...
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The Eclipse Caste counterparts were the Moonshadow Caste.
And yea the idea of even one Exalted being present in this universe is terrifying, let alone an Abyssal.
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I assure you, Sunshine isn't actually an Exalt. It's just that the sun theme and the dangerous-if-broken promise led to an appropriate chapter title.
I suppose Sunset could technically create Exaltations, possibly with Mr. Discord or Twilight as her Lytek, but she doesn't plan on anything like that in the foreseeable future.
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I assumed Exalts were just Creating themselves with all that leftover thematic belief magic sloshing around from the Saturation.
8163782 Sunset Shimmer Exalts... Wait, no, that's pretty boring, actually, probably just reflavoured solars... Discord Exalts... Oh, yes, I can get behind that though.
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Raksha.
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What's an Exalt and what's it from?
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Exalts are from the pen & paper RPG Exalted, and are what happens when the Sun, the Moon, the planets, Death or some other big concept plugs an extra soul into you and gives you the power to kick eldritch titans in the face. Including the ones who don't have faces.
Let's put it this way: A just-made Exalt can break stone with his bare hands. An experienced one can punch you so hard, she doesn't just turn you into a duck, she rewrites history such that you have always been a duck. It's that kind of game.
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So... kinda like Campione?