• Member Since 23rd Jun, 2015
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HeartGramHorse


I am a short story, poetry, and small literature writer that writes from my heart and types into something special for the world to see.

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Rainbow Dash has been traumatized by losing her wing. A wing to some Pegasi, might just be a misfortune, however for this rainbow cyan pony it's more of a symbol of a lost loved one that just died.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 5 )

I like the idea but the execution could use a little more work. Seems a bit rushed, and there was little to no background detail on top of flat character designs. I know that these are all established characters and timelines already but that doesn't take away from the fact that there was so little characterization involved that you could've switched a couple of names and the story wouldn't be any different.

A bit rushed, but good enough for me to fave.

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