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Simply Anarchy


Every great hero needs a great villain.

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Peaceful times have settled over Equestria. In fact it's actually kind of boring... that is until crime erupts from out of nowhere. Now Twilight and her friends must face perhaps their greatest foe yet, an evil mastermind that goes by the name Simply Anarchy. Twilight is convinced that with the power of friendship and a positive outlook, there is nothing they can't do. It is, in fact, her destiny to spread that very idea. She is about to learn the hard way, that not all ponies share her ideals. Some aren't after friendship, money, power, or anything obvious to that extent. Some ponies just want to watch the whole world crumble.

Takes place well after the events of episodes 1 and 2 of Season 6.

Simply Anarchy is a villainous OC of my own twisted mind!

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 63 )

Nice story so far, it will be fun read about a villain who doesn't get defeated by Rainbows n' Friendship, for once.

Comment posted by Eyes Over Heaven deleted Apr 4th, 2016

I could almost picture this as part of the actual show, keep up the good work.:pinkiehappy:

I love that song, it fits so well with the character. Great chapter man.

Sweet Celestia please, I need more! :pinkiecrazy:

Alright, at first I really enjoyed this story. Now, I'm completely hooked. I love Simply Anarchy as a character. He's just awesome. Keep up the good work.

Why do I feel like Discord's about to join the party?

7222917 I refuse to give any spoilers, my good fellow. Instead I leave you with this emoticon of Spike with a mustache. :moustache:

Awesome chapters. you are doing a amazing job. I can't wait to read the next chapter.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

7309193 I'm glad that you are enjoying the story! :twilightsmile:

From here on out, things can only get better.... right?

BUCK NO!!!!

Obviously Anarchy let himself be captured so that they would lower their guard down, his crew is then going to release him from the dungeon while everypony is busy with the Grand Galloping Galla. This is what is going to happen!

7311903 I just have to say that I freakin' love your enthusiasm! :rainbowlaugh:

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ESCAPE! THE GREAT ESCAPE!

Yeah new chapter! :pinkiehappy: Anarchy is so evil and witty, I love it. Keep up the good work.

Hahaha, hey it's midnight! BOOM goes the confetti.

"I'm fine! I tried to tell you..." The doctor said between breaths.
Twilight looked at him carefully. "It's okay! You're safe now. We're here to take you home!"
"You have more pressing matters to deal with at the moment." Hooves expelled dryly.
"What are you talking about?" Twilight quizzed eagerly.
"This whole thing was a trap. And you all walked right into it." the stallion responded.
Twilight looked up at her friends, then back to the doctor. "Trap? What do you--"
"Just think about it... Why would he give you his last bit of leverage? Why ask for you all specifically?" Hooves quizzed.
Twilight thought to herself. "To exchange for his freedom? But he would have asked to be freed before he handed him over. And he certainly wouldn't have gone through all of this trouble just to hand you over... unless..." Twilight's heart dropped.
"What? What is it, Twi?" Applejack asked fearfully.
Twilight swallowed nervously. "This was all a diversion to get us away from Canterlot."

Well I'll be damn! You figure it out Twilight!

Your fic is very well written and I want see the conclusion of the story.

But I really want to see Simple Anarchy (your villain) go down hard after this one! :twilightangry2: (he remind me of Shogo Makashima, the villain of Psycho-Pass Season 1)

Kudos to you to write such a villain.

I want to see anarchy and the forces of "harmony" reach a stalemate and have to figure out a way to not purify him like they did luna, but have dicord show anarchy that without order there is no chaos

7463855 Thank you kindly! In my opinion, if the bad guy doesn't get any sort of emotional reaction out of you, the writer isn't doing their job effectively. You will either love him or hate him. Either way, you feel something. I'm glad to see he got that kind of reaction out of you! :pinkiehappy:

Half Earth pony, half changeling? He's an Earth-ling! :pinkiehappy: Seriously though, great chapter. I was not expecting all the stuff that went down in this chapter.

7465795 Thank you very much! Glad to see that you are still engaged in my story! :twilightsmile:

7464708 i kinda want him to win cause bad guys usually never do but he's been outsmarting them at every turn so going down would be good too but if he got away you could make a sequel unless you had planned for this to be all in one story with a time skip

7495883 I can't say a whole lot, my friend... but I will say this. Anarchy is full of surprises. :raritywink:

Ooooh exating Times ahead

if he could have a changleing turn into him and another into flurry he could take the fall leaving the real duo peace and quiet to raise the real flurry to be the rebellion leader he wants

noooooo they have to win fuk u thorax

Oh a hate anarchy so Bucking mutch!
Love the story.
Anarchy is a great bad Guy please Thell Me the Mane 7 kicks the shit outa him:raritystarry:

I decided to choose Anarachy, hopefully Thorax starts acting stupid and then they would notice this, then they would kick him out of their base.

Anarchy make's Me so mad a whant to crush him *huff huff*. Alright he has the best personality of all the caracters in the show.
The writers shoud use him in the show for the season 7 villan.

7643537 Wow, that actually means a lot. Thank you most sincerely. If my OC, or anyone's OC for that matter, ever got a spot on the show, I would consider that the greatest honor an MLP fan could ever ask for! I would love to see an OC of a fan make it into the show, even if it were a minor role. As for Anarchy, they would obviously have to tone down the language and the violent tendencies. :rainbowlaugh:

The baby was a fake you beautiful magnificent bastard

Bad sign 1: OC's name is same as author's name.
Bad sign 2: Crappily edited Pony Creator cover art.
Bad sign 3: OC's '2edgy4u' appearance and name.
Bad sign 4: Description insisting that not everything can be solved by friendship (read: 'My sooper kewl OC is too badass to be affected by the elments of harmuny!!1!')
Bad sign 5: 19 chapters and almost no views or likes.
Bad sign 6: Deleted comment near the bottom.

Yeah, I ain't even touching this one.

7643686 "Almost no views or likes"? You do know the story stats are right there, at the top of the page, clearly contradicting this statement?

7643863 To be fair, he didn't say the story was bad. He never even read it.

7643686 To address a few of your concerns. Yes, the story art was created with help of Pony Creator. I'm a writer... not an artist. Yes, my name is the same as my OC. I wanted to insert my own personal character into my first story. I know it may be considered a bit self indulgent, but that was not my intent, I promise you. And, not to give away too many spoilers, but I do have more stories planned, some that don't involve Anarchy. Just throwing that out there. As far as the appearance and name goes, I just think he looks cool and his name was intended to give an insight into his true nature. All ponies have that. And, the description was meant to shake things up a bit. Some people enjoy reading about a villain who is unique. One that isn't the usual b.s. that can be solved through friendship and harmony. He embodies everything the Mane 6 isn't. Oh, and the views and likes gets messed up for me too sometimes, so I can't fault you for that. Finally, as far as the deleted comment goes, it was spam. Something about cocaine and saving the world... I can't make that up... Anyway, I'm sorry you won't give my story a shot, but I just felt like an explanation on my behalf was in order.

7643996 what i meen is read then Comment.

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And, the description was meant to shake things up a bit. Some people enjoy reading about a villain who is unique. One that isn't the usual b.s. that can be solved through friendship and harmony. He embodies everything the Mane 6 isn't.

You say that like it's something unique. There are tons of stories like that, and from what I've seen they tend to be rather edgy. This one looks like it might be leaning that way. It can be done very well, and has been before, such as Bookworm's Delight. But the stories that do it well don't tend to advertise it in their descriptions. It isn't really a selling point that explicitly needs to be said. It should happen naturally in the story.

7644111 In that case, I totally agree. Opinions are made through experience, not just looking at something and saying it's bad. But I suppose he has a right to voice his opinion, despite how narrow-minded and hasty it may be. Thank you for backing me up, though, Silent.

Am I a bad person for always wanting the bad guy to win? Either way, loving the story. Keep up the awesome work dude.

7643537 If that happens Anarchy would win! And the writers do not want that!

Keep Updating Anarchy the Author! Make sure to make Anarchy the OC win against Celestia!

Is there a reference sheet for simply anarchy I can look at?

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