I'm Lefty Flip. I write darker stories... Mainly.
It was a normal afternoon for a tired Dash. That was... Until crying came from a box. Inside, was a filly. This filly was known as Scootaloo. This story follows her aging from weak, and whimpering filly... To strong, and grown mare. Follow Dash as she shows Scootaloo the ins and outs of life.
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What can say about this story is it seemed really rushed. Can see a lot of potential in this story but it just seems to end. Plus in what place does a pony get 15 yearof prison for assult. And you never said what actually happened between scootaloo and the other filly. It just seems too short and not enough detail. Other than that pretty good.
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Nice
I love this story so far 
That's a weird way to end a story like why get mad at something so little? Like were you running out of ideas to get rainbow arrested? Because this doesn't make since how she beats a teacher like that just because she thought she was lying, if it was that crucial why not put her in another school? But other than that it was a awesome story!
