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Immortan Joe


Follow me and I myself will carry you to the gates of Valhalla. Where you'll ride eternal, shiny and chrome!

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Ten years later after the Pony Pacification, humans and equine soldiers alike reflect back onto the most infamous amphibious invasion known as: "The Day of Disharmony" when over three hundred and fifty thousand human soldiers and armor stormed the beaches of Las Pegasus on what was called: Operation Reprisal along with the horrific occupation that soon followed through.

Possible Triggers: Gore and extreme prejudice pointed at humans and ponies alike

Story and or character tags may change as the story progresses

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 29 )

Pretty good, looking forward to the next chapter.

This reads really well. I do hope you continue!

Celestia - 'I will build a great wall and I will make the humans pay for it! Then I will declare war on the evil warlike humans for their evil warlike ways!’

Humans- 'Dakka! Dakka! Dakka! Dakka! Dakka!'

Ponies- ‘Oh no, turns out the evil warlike humans are really good at war!’

I'm wondering is this a sort of Conversion Bureau fic or just an all out war? Will we see Celestias motivations later? And what of the Mane 6?

Huh, interesting concept. I'll keep a lookout for the next chapter. Keep it up!

Your opening chapter snatched my attention like a dingo eating a baby. Frankly I think TCB fics are a cancer and this story just might be the cure. What I want to see is blood and gore just for the sake of it. I want Ultraviolence written in brutal detail. I want you to write a story detailing those little fucking pony's woefully regretting ever daring to fuck with Humanity. If you can acquiesce that request you'll be my hero for life.

If this request offended any sensitive and delicate little snowflakes out there fuck your feelings.

7860771 Your avatar image fits your comment perfectly. I love it.

7860949 thank you so much I was rocking a solid buzz when I composed it. It's usually wear my best writing comes from. I think it also helped that I was listening to this as I was reading the chapter.

Looking forward to seeing more of this, it's always nice to find a human/pony story that's entirely awesome!

I would like a little more story/background, but for demonstrating the heat of battle where the winners are no less bad or good than the losers, I think it does very well. I would like to read it if you were to expand upon it.

Never underestimate human depravity.

Also, TCB stories, especially those turnaround stories where Equestria loses and everyone dies, are generally just depressing for the heck of it. Why would I want to read that? At least this was tense and such with purpose, rather than feels for the sake of depressing.

Also, I got a very Interstellar vibe from that opening scene, which may have been totally intentional, though I was wondering where all the human survivors were.

7879603 I am expending upon the story, just pretty slowly.

The chapter here mainly focused on the ponies getting over run. Most of the chapters, not all, are going to focus on certain events from specific point of views. Without going too much into spoiler territory, the next chapter will focus more on the humans establishing a foot hold.

Also Interstellar vibe was kinda intentional, ever since seeing that movie I've been kinda using that a lot. However, I was mostly going for a Band of Brothers/The Pacific focus.

Pretty confusing, as any battle should be.

"Over and out" is incorrect radio protocol. It should simply be "out".

That said I do like this story. Will we see the "present" of this setting? Maybe Equestria and the Terran Alliance are now allies like Germany and the US.

Nanananananananana HUMANS VS PONIIIIES!!!! Kill all of the cute horses HUMANS VS PONIES!!!! They just wanted to be friends!


Nice story, IGN 10/10

So I take it this is kind of a dead end story now. I had such high hopes for it as well. That's a pity.

8125368 Things tend to happen when you're a busy person :moustache:

This is actually one of the best Pon v Human I've ever seen. Please, continue!

So is it safe to say it's abandoned?

8126449
Bro u there? This is a really good story and id hate to see it abandoned

Goddamnit. Another great story with lots of potential abandoned. Makes me sad every-damn-time.

7860771
Do you know any similar stories? About ponies regretting "dearing to fuck with humans" + ultraviolence. Or just being taken over by them (it's usually the other way around, lmao)

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