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Midnight Radiance


Anime is my guide, fantasy is my drive for inspiration.

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Moondancer and Twilight are two mares that have a lot in common, but Moondancer realizes that there is one thing that sets them apart.

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This was kinda depressing... But somehow in a positive way? I don't know how to feel!

But I know I enjoyed this, despite not know what some of my feelings are! Lol

7077766 Lol, I'm glad you enjoyed it. That is my first Slice of Life story :twilightsmile:

Interesting story. Moon Dancer seems to think Spike is the main difference between her and Twilight.

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Yep! I always thought it was off that Moon Dancer is Twilight's other self if she never gained friends, but there was something missing, Spike. Moon Dancer doesn't have one for that created this.

Interesting, truly strong representative of the SoL genre, mildly sad and touching :twilightsmile: I really like the idea behind this, showing how much of an important role does Spike play and how only that one missing him can see that.

I'd be a little bit more cautious with the retellings of the show events, such as the one in the lecture hall. I can't really put my finger on it, but they contrasted with the rest of the thoughtful story a little too much.

Thank you for this read, it gave me a lot to ponder on :ajsmug:

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Thank you!

I'm really glad you liked it. I'll keep that in mind next time.

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You're welcome :twilightsmile: Though remember that I'm only one subjective person, others might see it differently. It may be good if you ask others as well how do these particular spots feel.

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