i used to be an editor on here, but real life got in the way. i still write a little bit, though it's been a hot minute since i've posted lmao
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This story is a sequel to That's Your Downfall
Discord has been defeated. Princess Celestia and her younger sister, Princess Luna, confronted him, and they defeated him. However, due to Discord's accusations, Luna starts to doubt if Celestia should be ruling.
Thanks to Edukas for pre-reading it and giving his wonderful opinion!
Written because people wanted more of the one-shot I did...
Cover art done by Vincher! Check her stuff out!
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Excuse me. Need to slap Celestia is rising...
Anyway, I do remember this. very nice. It's marked as finished... but it's only the beginning!
7586514 It's going to be a series of three one-shots~
And of course, by breaking her loyalty to her sister she fall's to her own darkness.
I like the idea behind this story, and most of the chapter expect for trying to put Celestia on the same level as the other characters because she never did anything a bad as the rest of them and didn't appear to fall to the corruption of her Element.
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Isn't it great?
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She hasn't done anything horribly bad yet.
Spotted a couple lingering typos along the way. I love the concept of this though. It's pretty damn imaginative and fits together nicely. Definitely made me think, and that is always a plus.
This was so deep... I liked it. Also, is the "Element of Loyalty" what turned Luna into Nightmare Moon? Also, have a follow. I rarely follow people from the first story I've read from them, but I'll make an exception this time.
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Wow am I late on replying to you on this one, but if you liked this one, you should definitely check out its prequel, "That's Your Downfall". Both this and that story are two of my favorites that I actually have written.
Thanks for the compliment by the way!
You can has review!
I really enjoyed seeing a sequel to That's Your Downfall continue with your unique world-building. I hope that you continue to release projects. I saw that there were upcoming projects on your page.