Good chapter can't wait for the next,one

I like it! Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully the busted train gets to Canterlot with no more problems!

"Things escalated quickly and, needless to say, Anon never had to worry about waking up to the sounds of Lyra and Bonbon's voices. The latter he now had to pay bits to for her help in waking him up, like a the protection fee people pay to the mob. Bonbon might be sweet and charming openly, but behind closed doors, she was ruthless and conniving."

I don't get it…Lyra ask her help and she say yes, why is he now paying Bonbon it doesn't make sense

.......that mare was a bitch

Neither did I. She could weaponized her brand of sexy.
*have

“In any case, are you here to pick me up, or are you just just window shopping?”
*here to go

and then turn remote on.

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Sorry to be a stick in the mud, but someone's gotta do it. Need an editor?

This was an awesome chapter! As for the mare, she can suck Cerberus' left nut in Tartarus for all I care.

Very nice chapter but quite a few grammatical and spelling errors. Otherwise loved the interactions between the two, nicely done. If you ever need an editor shoot me a pm I'll be happy to help.

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You know as soon as they get off in Canterlot they can just let a royal guard know that the mare attacked the mother of both a Prince and a Princess of Equestria. Let her rot in a dungeon for a few days as a lesson to not be such a bitch before letting her go free. Should be enough time to scare her from ever doing such things again by the various scenarios of what could happen to her for doing such a thin

Loved this chapter i honestly cannot wait for more

7275438 you forgotten the double use of a few words.

Ravvij I do love the story so far, but I do see a few errors.

Ow my this is a very interesting story to read it keep me very interested in the story keep up a good work update more soon

you got featured again on June 4th

I'm surprised that he didn't retaliate. I know that if I was in that situation, I'd have picked up a marble and beaned her right in the horn using these upper appendages that are made specifically for the throwing of objects at a high velocity.

Well. I suppose that when you pay a weird excitable unicorn with a human fetish to come to your bed every morning, you pretty much get what you pay for.

Also, I know that this has probably been done to death already, but I can't help myself. Hey Twilight!

Who's Yo Daddy?

And they don't call them ties Formal Nooses for nothing Anon.

... Okay, nobody calls them that, but they should! If every spy in a tux is anything to go by anyway.

Lastly, I hope Discord farts on your food for the rest of your life you snooty mustard-stained racist!!

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You do realize you can edit comments instead of posting multiple comments right?

Well yeah, but that would mean chopping off the narrative and tone of my individual comments to turn it into something that would fit all three of them, not to mention how long it would be otherwise, especially when two out of three of them are simply one-liners.

Besides, a story this amazing yet underappreciated needs to have a bit more comments, don't you think?

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It wouldn't solve the issue at hand. It's best to be an adult and don't stoop to childish levels.

Looking forward to more.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Any idea when it's going to come out?

7300706 I don't. I'm looking forward to writing the next chapter when I get the chance. Probably soon, I hope.

7302116 this story is very good, if you suddenly decided to forget about adding Button's mom and only kept Velvet I wouldn't mind by how good it is so far

Mmmmmmmmmmm Yeah!

MILF time?!
oh yeah!

7302116 Wait I just noticed in the description, who is Love Tap? Is she another milf you're gonna add later on?

7351869 Yes. You've technically already seen her too.

7354560 the one who threw the marbles?

7355396 nope

7355422 Hmmm.... can you tell me or do I need to guess?

7355422 Wait scratch that. Love Tap is Button Smach's mother. Never knew her name was Love Tap

7355489 She's been given a lot of other names, "Love Tap" is just the one I like best.

7355897 that must have been it, anyways hope to see new chapters soon. This story has tons of potential and I can't wait to see what you have instored for us~

got any idea when the next chapter will be out
i need more!!!!

Surely Author will release another amazing chapter soon!

7369512 I hope to. Maybe I'll be able to write the next chapter this weekend, but I make no promises.

PpppppppppPssssssssssstttttttt

7384613 ???

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Oh, I just wanted to get your attention.

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Lyra and Bon Bon turned it into 'sexual help', and Bon Bon is having him pay for their... 'service'.

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Sounds like extortion, specially since they are the ones that made the first move

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Well. More BonBon than Lyra. But as long as Anon doesn't REALLY mind (he doesn't, as shown - he still considers it a good idea as he said prior) then... /shrug

Getting woken up with a MFF threesome to help with that morning wood is a service worth paying for.

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Then why the fear? ah who cares, he can stop and be done with it, I just don't see so much reason for him be afraid of Bon Bon

*stares at Ravvij*

PPPPPPSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTUUUH!!!!!

more please

7469298 I promise, once I'm out of my summer job and back into college, I'll finish the next 2 chapters. I've been too stressed at the insanity of my summer job to even be able to write more than a chapter for one of The Abyss's stories.

7470732 didn't say I wouldn't wait for them did I?

7470732 so new chapters coming soon?