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Forced feels huh? 2/8 b8.
7060006 Is that really what it feels like? Hm... thank you.
I Agree with hamster its really forced. At first i thought you were gonna try to go with a delusional protagonist that pretends everythings is gonna be alright or someone having vivid hallucinations or flashbacks. Instead we got some extremely odd pacing and feelings? who the heck is that happy when out of the blue you have 2 days to spend with your loved one. Don't get me started on the random terminal illness. overall i think the major issue is pacing and direction. Then ending was so abrupt.