“To rise triumphant, to be proclaimed a victor was always her dream.
But when the shy mare fulfills her dream, she is left with a choice.
To stay a victor, or become a hero?”
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Your completly right, this story is special! I loved the details and the mood felt really nice. I've never considered the fact that Fluttershy could be called a hero for her kindness. While the moral felt just a little bit forced, it was pretty sweet all in all. Liked and Faved
Found one questionable thing:
I'm not positive, but I think "why" should be lowercase, since it's in the middle of a sentence. Also, what does Fluttershy mean by 'being tired of silencing'? Does she mean her shyness?
Anyway, I think you're a great writer! Keep writing these amazing pieces!
~Harmony Pie
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Thank you, I'll be sure to fix up that typo right away.
You know, I've waited a long time for you. Since the great, Absolute Anonymous left many years ago I've been waiting to see who might be the one to take her place. I think that person might just be you. You're an awful lot younger but you have the same wit and charisma as she did. You definitely have the same talent and I'm sure you can raise to the same heights that she did.
I'm glad you think my story is worthy of being considered a favorite. I honestly wasn't sure how well this story would be received. Especially considering that the conflict is a personal one. I can understand the moral feeling a little forced, neither my editor nor I managed to pick up on that. But thank you for your criticism anyway.
I'll be sure to keep writing these 'amazing pieces.'
- A
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Wow, for realsie? I definantly can't get that level of talent, but I'm glad you think that highly of me when I'm just... me
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Just you wait and see, you're gonna go far kid.
*Your
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Thanks, I'll fix that typo straight away. Do you have any thoughts on the story though?
7069551 Not really. It's a typical Fluttershy gets over her fears story. It's been done to death in the show and otherwise, but that doesn't keep it from being sweet.
Two words: Sweet & Satisfying
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I'm certainly glad you thought so. Sadly, this story didn't receive the reception I had hoped but I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway.