On the planet of Krypton, there was a family named "Ko" that right after getting tipped off by the house of el about the destruction of krypton, decided they should also plan to evacuate as well, although they had a different idea of where to go.
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Pretty good.
I'd like to see where this is going.
Needs editing, you change tenses in the middle of sentences, are missing conjunctions and verbs. Not bad a bad story, just messy writing.
7898329 i know but i had to delete alot of stuff in order fr it to pass moderation.
7898389 All the more reason to go over it, mkaeing sure you "cuts are clean"