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Neutral Boy


First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.

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(Taking place a few weeks before Princess Twilight arrives to retrieve her crown.)

After having a break up a few months ago and visiting his friend in a hospital saving him from a fight of unknown attackers, Davis Jones's life has been boring and keeping a distance to his friends at Canterlot High. Luckily his cousin has visited him sometimes by cheering him up, but that's all going to change when he finds three gems in a mall and picked them up to get a slight tingle on his body. When he puts them back on the shelf by a bunch other things from that weird tingling, he goes back outside and walking home later on. Now things get crazy when he hears knocks at the door. It was three siren sisters and they were informing or telling him that they finally now have a brother in the siren family, wow didn't see that one coming.

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Comments ( 7 )

I'm going to gently suggest you get an editor. It could be interesting, but it does need editing.

7369428 Yeah I would admit for anyone to help me out, but I want to see how well this story goes so far before needing some help since it'll be the first time writing about the Equestrian Girls story.

Who else found this by accident while searching 'Davy Jones' from Pirates of the Caribbean?lol

Surprised no one has displaced him yet :trixieshiftright:

Please bring the story back is very interesting to read keep up the good work update soon

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I'm really glad there are some people that would like me to continue on with my stories. :twilightsmile: Don't worry, this story won't be on hiatus for long. I just need to finish on some of my other stories and hopefully reach the mark of my 20 published stories. Then I can finally work on this story again. :rainbowdetermined2:

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