Nikolai Sanders, a wizard apprentice is chased through the al'gathoria forests by the talghier wolves. Nikolai finds a tree whilst running and is taken to the magical land of Equestria.
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mari tech
Starting back up this account, no longer a ghost watching from the shadows. I've decided that I've learned enough since my first stories that I can try again at writing.
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Since no one else is commenting on this good story I'll do it. I'm enjoying it so far however I'm worried about his wand for what's it's made of and his reliance on it. It's definitely gonna get him in trouble when twilight finds out what it's made of or how he got it. Another problem is without his wand he seems powerless his magic already seems weak he can't even heal his leg.
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thank you for commenting. i haven't been able to reply quickly or write more of my fic due to a viral sickness. i will get right on the story as soon as i overcome my sickness. if you have any suggestions, concerns, stories, poems, raps, or complaints, feel free to comment again.
Man his brand of magic sounds dangerously unpredictable.
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And you should write names and unique stuff with a capital letter first.
Example: Al'gathoria, not al'gathoria
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Weak? That's like OP for a starting character!
But the story is still cool!
It's strange that no-one reads this, it's an awsum story so far and I would like to see more chapters in the future!
Also, if I were you I wouldn't rush the story, you write it too fast and it seems to end like it started, Boom and nothing.
DAMN YOU CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!
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Thanks for sticking with this story. Do you think i should put the gore tag on?
7179731 Yes, it would be better with the tag. The story has bloodshed and killing so a gore tag should be placed in here. And no problems, I'll stick with this story as long as it continiues .
Peace!
Love it so far bit fast pace and at the same time slow pace but needless to say ill be keeping an eye on this one
7189038
Well, that's how life is like. It can be fast at times, and slow at other times. Thank you for liking my story.
Yay.
A new chapter!
Hey, I see you uploaded a new chapter and I must say it was faster this time. I've noticed your type of writing and it's written poorly and I wanted to show you how to improve it.
Example;
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It's all in the sentences end where you are making a lot of mistakes.
Peace!
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Thank you for the help, i'm not that great with writing stories for others, i just write how i understand it. It's something i need to work on. Thanks for the feedback.
Really Celestia gonna judge someone based on what their race did in the past
but I guess she's just being cautions. I just hope twilight doesn't turn against our wizard because of Celestia.
You should change this into itallic letters. A example; blabliblabla. Also it's not Canter-lot, it's Canterlot
I am liking so far, fast paced but nice
Really?!??? Fine??
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"You have committed terrible crimes. Five deaths were cast by you." The judge spoke
"Is it that bad?" You ask
"Yes."
"Maybe you will let me go?"
"Fine."
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That's hilarious!????
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You were walking across the street when a man suddenly appeared and yelled at you, while holding a index finger on your torso "I SEE YOUR SOUL." The man shouted. You look around and find nothing and then you say "Eh." And turn around walking away from the confused psycho man.
The end. Fin.
Is S'under's name
it's small
A very passionate story
"I love you." I said
"I love you too." she replied
The end. Fin