After being granted a wish by Princess Luna, Rainbow Dash becomes the single strongest, most muscular mare in all of Equestria. Will it be enough to finally make her father, a world champion strongpony, proud of her?
My name's Rainbow Dash and it has been three years since I became a pony (yes, originally I was human). I get asked 'How?' a gazillion times a day so I wrote this. Now stop reading the description and get on with it already
Spitfire is tired of Rainbow Dash's ridiculous stories. Dash doesn't see the problem. The Ponyville chief of police had hoped for a quiet Hearth's Warming for once.
I think the best thing about this was that you had me for a moment. (I completely didn't catch the comedy tag) I absolutely adore any fic featuring Spitfire and Nightshade, and I enjoyed this one. I hope to see more with these two in the future - perhaps expanding into the teams doing random shenanigans like this. I also LOVE that Nightshade is a rival here and not a villain, but that's simply personal preference.
Your capitalization rules need work, but overall I'd say the grammar is pretty good. I enjoyed this little story!
That was good. It is nice to see a fanfic involving the shadowbolts and wonderbolts together.
7036143 Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^_^
7036305 by the way, there is group that focus on shadowbolts and wonderbolts. I recommend adding it to the group so everyone else can read it.
Oh God,I think I laughed a little too hard when I realized what was going on
Great job!!You earned a like,fav and follow
7038970 Thank you so much! It makes me so happy that people enjoy this. I'm glad I was able to make you laugh. :D
I think the best thing about this was that you had me for a moment. (I completely didn't catch the comedy tag) I absolutely adore any fic featuring Spitfire and Nightshade, and I enjoyed this one. I hope to see more with these two in the future - perhaps expanding into the teams doing random shenanigans like this. I also LOVE that Nightshade is a rival here and not a villain, but that's simply personal preference.
Your capitalization rules need work, but overall I'd say the grammar is pretty good. I enjoyed this little story!