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I'm a young author from Equestria with plenty of ideas.

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Rainbow Dash, one of the best rookie flyers in Equestria, a loyal friend, and the newest resident of Ponyville. She seems unstoppable, a cyan bolt of lightning tearing through her competition as she trains to join the Wonderbolts. One day, however, a stunt during training takes a horrifying turn as a brutal accident lands her in the hospital. She recovers to a clean bill of health physically, but she has suffered severe brain damage, and has forgotten most of her life. As she begins to recover her memories, a small orange Pegasus filly starts following her around, cheering Rainbow on when she performs her death-defying stunts and calling Rainbow her hero and idol. But why?
Well, little Scootaloo knows that one of the strongest bonds in the world is sisterhood.

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Well written, you earned a follow! :pinkiehappy:

Whelp, let's see how things go from here. I wonder if she even remembers anything about her friends, or did she forget everything? :twilightoops:

7033915 This takes place before the start of the show.

She recovers to a clean bill of health physically, but she has suffered severe brain damage

This seems like a contradiction.

7035169 Outwardly, she is fine. She can fly, run around, and interact with other ponies. However, her memory is all but completely gone.

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A clean bill of health means there is nothing physically wrong with her, but if she's suffering from brain damage then there is clearly a physical problem, it's just not externally visable. That sentence would be fine if the memory lose was psychosomatic but it's not.

7035270 Or never updated in ages.....

Well this is depressing....I teared up just by reading the synopsis :twilightblush::pinkiesad2:

Poor Scoots. The feels, it hurts.

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Ah, is that it. I suspected with the description saying Rainbow was the newest resident - I'd like to see where this goes. Does she re-meet Fluttershy, or does she still remember Fluttershy and how she got her cutiemark?

Hurry please write more. This is sooooo good. Glad I tracked it

Ooooh, a memory loss, eh? Can't wait for the other chapters!!!:rainbowhuh:

This will certainly bee an interesting story.

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