This is just a short comedy so give it a go. Luna has been banished to the moon for a silly misunderstanding, but it's so BORING. There's nothing to do, until Celestia sends a gift. But will this gift help or just make it worse for her?
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Oh, this is gold! >“I guess I forgot?”
that was the most cruel and unusual treatment to give to anybody ever... well valve comes close...
This was actually surprisingly funny. A like for you.
Thanks for the comments
If you can think of any way to improve i'll be happy to hear your thoughts and suggestions
so cruel
(facepalm)
hay for all we know it went a little like that
poor luna. here is a battery powered off moon rocks.
Lovely little comedy here!
Luna was banished into the moon, not to it
I just have to say this. Good idea but poor execution.