If you happen to cry, I will be there. If you happen to smile, will you do the same for me?
Before coming to Ponyville, Pinkie Pie was a secret murderer. When she quit, she believed that part of her life behind her. Yet, there are things one cannot simply walk away from.
One day, a pony from her past pays a visit and asks that Pinkie do one last job. Having to target the mare she secretly loves, Pinkie Pie now has an hour to experience romance for the first time, before she has to do the deed.
Written for the 10th **** this prompt contest.
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Alright, you got me, that was really good for something unedited, great job
Also, I've gotta ask, Sequel or no Sequel?
7028094 :) Thanks :D
Well, not sure yet. Will wait for the contest to end (and get it edited) :) After that will see.
Oh lol Lise a Secret murderer hmm?
7029673 O:)
Well, it's an un thankful job, but someone has to do it. :)
You know what? ... I ain't even mad.
http://youtu.be/CP6v4T3VT7I
7029913 :D Thank you.
I tend to experiment a bit too much in my writing at times O:)
I'm gonna take a stab here (no pun intended) and say that I think Pinkie Pie doesn't murder anything but secrets themselves. And I'll hazard a guess that Sweetie Belle is the one hiring her.
7030397 :) You know me too well.
I am so confuzzled right now but somehow I think I like being confuzzled
Great story Lise
-Flare
That twist at the end! I knew something would happen since there was no Dark, Sad, or Tragedy tag, but you really got me there. Turns out pink coat meant blushing, not blood, as I had thought.
Great job anyways for an unedited story!
I WAS ACTUALLY FOOLED BY THIS STORY, I DID NOT EXPECT THAT ENDING AT ALL, I was getting nervous near the end QaQ I HAVE NEVER BEEN TROLLED SO HARD IN MY LIFE
...and I'm ok with that. XD
Bruh you have zero chill
Laughed out loud. Maybe because I'm drunk. Regardless. Great job
7031888 :) You know I always try to confuse :P
7035589 :) Thankee :D glad you enjoyed :)
At some point I really need to rewrite this :) Possibly into a multi... Argh! So many things... O:)
7044045 Eeek? :)
Well, the life of a secret murderer is a complicated one. O:)
Also, braces! :D
7066309 :D Thankee!
Hopefully it was a happy laugh :D
I... I fell for it. It was so obvious and in my face and I feel for it. ..
You can has review!
7548456 :) Pinkie has that effect
7549060 Thanks, Paul! :))) This is incredible. :D
Very touched you gave this a read (And sorry for the surprise ending. The other would have been a bit too dark for me.)
Hope you enjoyed parts :)
Holy crap I didn't know what to expect but... @_@ dat twist so good
7565675 :D It's the ship, right? You just liked the ship :P
7565741 No! I mean, I liked the ship, but what really got me was that feeling of "omg she's gonna kill her what's gonna happen" and then at the end I was just like "@_@". Like, I was surprised at how surprised I was, because while stories do sometimes throw me off, not usually to this extent. Plus I love dorky wordplay, so that's a plus :P
7565754 Aww, thanks :)))
And here I was expecting a tragedy!
-__- I feel legit stupid right now lol this was great.
I like it. I like it a lot.
You now, the repeated use of the phrase "secret killer" rather bugged me, just because it's a bit of a goofy phrase. If this really were a story about Pinkie struggling with murderous impulses (as I thought this was), then "serial killer" or "hired killer" or just "hitmare" would have made just as much sense and sounded more serious. But then that final reveal drops and suddenly the reason for that specific phrase makes sense.
I had to read the ending 3 times before i got it, then i bust out laughing when i did lol
This is sooo good i am going recommend this to a few friends ^^
I 'ad a giggle.