For whatever reason, people still wanna bring me down just because. But, I'm not gonna go down without a fight. Not after everything I've had...
Thank you, Luna...
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I'm male, and autistic, just so you know. I've been looking for a career for years till I came here. Hugs to those I love, and the trustworthy friends I make here someday.
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No surrender, no excuses. Don't accept the lies they throw at you. Just keep on walking. Resist the devil, and he will flee from you (James 4:7).
i like it my friend. this story has lifted my spirit up after all those haters i get. thank you man for making this one.
7045472 no problem bro. I'm glad you did.
One thing I noticed with your stories is meeting new people.
Disregarding grammar mistakes, this quote right here should be a couple of paragraphs long. It should not only describe the new character but it should also set the personality of the character. For instance, Luna can be shy and doesn't really understand how to fit in, she can also be an elitist. These are the things that should be in the "meeting stage".
*2: "It walked close to me with a concerned look on its face, introducing itself as Luna". Luna is not an 'it' if she can introduce herself and express emotions. Well, I guess you can still say 'it' but it does not match with the flow of the story.
Underline: Weird phrasing of the sentence.
Too many things happening in the last sentence. Plus you would never look away from something that 'can't' exist that quickly. "I stared at the creature behind me before turning back around and staring straight forward." <- Is that better?
Also, haters, as you call them, are definitely not envious of you, they just want a reaction out of you, that's the fun of hating after all. Adults tell you that they envy you but that is just to make kids feel better.