The Entrance of the Equestrian Hive
Vladimir, Broad Sword and Shining Armor gently began to approach where they knew one of the entrances to the Equestrian Hive would be. They had been dropped off via helicopter a short ways back, deciding to hoof it out from there so as to not attract any undue attention to themselves. On a normal day a perception filter would be covering up their chosen entrance, and the only reason they should have been able to find it with ease was because they already knew exactly where it was. However, just like all the previous days leading up to that point it was anything but normal.
The entrance was completely visible to all outside eyes. There was no perception filter, no guards, and even the doorway at the end of the cavern opening was wide open. The three ponies stood at the entrance to said cavern staring down into it, each of them on edge.
“Well, that’s unnerving,” Vladimir commented. “Abandoned. That shouldn’t be like that, should it?”
“We can see it normally for one thing,” Broad Sword pointed out. “And there are no guards or anything. I don’t like the look of this.”
“We keep going,” Shining Armor commanded. “We need to see what’s going on inside the hive.”
“We should be even more careful in there,” Broad Sword responded. “Last thing we want is to get trapped underground.”
“We will. Come on.”
The three armoured equestrians continued with caution, creeping their way into the cavern and through those large doors. The hallways beyond were just as silent as the entrance, but the most distressing fact wasn’t that. No, it wasn’t the stillness of the hive or the odd claustrophobic feeling they were all getting without the presence of the changelings.
No, it was the fact that there were signs of a struggle, and they were everywhere.
Discarded weapons and armour, gashes along the walls, magic burns. They even found a smear of dried blood that was in such a pattern that it suggested something, changeling or pony, was dragged violently through the hallway.
And the silence remained.
By now it was painfully obvious something big had happened in the absence of Queen Twilight Sparkle, and they could make some good guesses as to what. But despite the blood and damage, there was still something missing. Something they expected to see around every corner but never came across.
“Shining?” Vladimir called out. “Where are all the bodies?”
“Removed?” Broad Sword suggested.
“Why bother? The attackers obviously didn’t intend to keep the place,” Shining stated in response. “You saw those drag marks, blood streaking across the floor. I think they were taken by force.”
“To have done to them what was done to Queen Draco and her hive,” Broad Sword morbidly agreed.
“We should check the atrium next, then the throne room.”
“Got it.”
They continued onwards, Vladimir taking point with Broad Sword taking the rear. All of them drew their weapons before proceeding and readied themselves for anything. Their intakes and exhales of breath were steady and quiet, each step calculated in order to reduce the noise produced. After agonising minutes of deafening silence they came close to an entrance into the atrium.
“Just around the next corner,” Vladimir stated back to his fellows in hushed tones.
The thestral rounded one last corner, and halted suddenly. The others walked up and stood alongside him, both staring at the same thing as Vladimir.
“Well,” the Captain of the Lunar Guard said. “So much for no bodies.”
A dead changeling was crushed up against a broken door that had been blown off its hinges, the doorway in question giving a view of the atrium beyond. It seemed like the changeling had been thrown into the doors at incredible speeds, likely a decently powerful spell, the door giving way to the impact and killing the changeling. A quick inspection also revealed the changeling to be of neither Twilight’s hive nor Queen Draco’s.
“One of the attackers I’d say,” Broad Sword noted. “They didn’t take their own dead with them.”
“They came to take the population of this hive, disabling at most and not killing,” Shining Armor observed with a grim expression. “I doubt those defending themselves had any such reservations. But it didn’t help them, and whoever is behind this has no need of the dead.”
“You know this changeling’s fate was taken from him,” Broad Sword stated. “None of his actions were his own in the end.”
“I know. And now Twilight’s hive is… with her.”
Broad Sword placed a hoof on Shining Armor’s shoulder, the unicorn sagging slightly out of despair. They were distracted by a loud cough given off by Vladimir, who had entered the atrium and was beckoning them to follow. When they did so, Vladimir sadly gestured towards a prone earth pony mare laying by several upturned tables.
Vladimir sighed. “They may have wanted the changelings alive, but they had no interest in the ponies.”
“That’s why none of the visitors returned,” Broad Sword noted. “We have to assume they are all dead.”
“Records indicated that there were a little over two dozen ponies visiting around the time everything went silent,” Shining Armor said. “On a piece of paper that number seems small. But it’s two dozen lives too many.”
“Well, I can spot a few others,” Vladimir responded, looking over a railing down into the rest of the atrium.
One such pony carcass sat at the base of the seemingly intact statue of Queens Avia and Chrysalis, surrounded by a few more dead invaders. There seemed to be a few more bodies around the various floors, leading them to the conclusion that the atrium was where the fighting and resistance was the heaviest, unsurprising considering that the atrium was essentially the beating heart of the hive. A now silent and very dead heart.
“There were thousands upon thousands of changelings here, this was the second largest hive,” Broad Sword noted. “They can’t have gotten them all.”
“If they’d assimilated the largest hive and all the rest…” Vladimir pointed out. “Though, I hope some got out.”
“There’s nothing here for us,” Shining Armor declared. “We’ll check the throne room, and then decide what to do from there.”
The other two nodded in confirmation, letting the Prince take the lead with the two captains following shortly behind. That deep into the hive they continued on to only hear silence, signs of a struggle still present. It was all exactly the same as it had been since they first entered the giant subterranean structure. The only exception was a few more bodies, one more pony and the rest being changelings. One of those changelings was a guard from Twilight’s hive, having likely been inadvertently killed during a struggle with the invaders.
When the group eventually reached the throne room and entered the large cavern they were met with exactly what they expected to be met with. Nothing. Nothing at all. The room was empty, but showing the same signs of fighting as the rest of the hive. Both the doors were already open on their arrival, giving them an immediate view of the entire throne room. The three ponies strode in, the captains studying the entire thing while the Prince was transfixed with what remained of the throne itself.
The once mighty seat of power was no more, a scorch mark from a powerful magic blast in its place with the spell having completely destroyed the throne. Shining Armor stopped, looking down to find one piece of the rubble at his hooves; the very edge of a pink starburst could still be seen on it, a single smaller white star remaining just a little ways from the point. It was all that remained of the proud cutie mark that used to decorate the back of the throne. His sister’s mark.
Broad Sword had also noted the vandalism, and walked up next to the unicorn. “An act of blatant disrespect against Twilight. If she is under this control of sorts, then the one pulling the strings is clearly proud of it.”
Shining Armor gave the Pegasus a brief glare before turning back to the throne, fire in his eyes. Whatever his thoughts, he didn’t share them, electing to remain silent in his rumination.
Vladimir looked on just behind the two, seeing that Shining Armor needed his space for the moment. He turned away from the throne and began to walk back towards the doorway, exiting out into the hall beyond.
He had only just taken that step out when he was suddenly and very violently tackled to the ground.
“Hey!” Broad Sword shouted, having seen the strike from the corner of his eye, quickly rushing back to aid his friend with Shining quickly snapping out of his inner thoughts and following behind.
“Ngh…” Vladimir groaned as he took in the too glowing orbs staring down at him, two orbs containing what he swore appeared to be embarrassment.
“Façade, they’re friends!” another male voice shouted, one that Vladimir recognised.
It appeared Shining Armor and Broad Sword did too, given that they screeched to a halt the moment they heard him.
“Carduus?”
Façade stepped off the thestral, a little flustered. “Yeah, I can see that. The fur gave it away.”
Vladimir rubbed his head briefly before sitting up, finding an outstretched hole riddled hoof waiting for him. Vladimir accepted the help, and Façade helped the stricken thestral to his hooves.
It was now that Shining Armor and Broad Sword fully walked out into the hall and joined their fellow pony, all three taking in the new arrivals.
There was Façade, a changeling adorned in the red armour of Queen Draco’s guard. Carduus was with him, as were Panacea and Iuvenes.
“Carduus!” Shining Armor greeted, relief flooding his voice. “You’re all alright?”
“Barely,” Carduus responded before pointing at Façade. “We have him to thank.”
“You mean the guy who tackled me?” Vladimir deadpanned.
“Sorry for that,” Façade apologised. “You popped out right in front of me, I thought you were one of them.”
“You mean the attacking changelings?” Shining asked.
“Yes, the Empress’ attack dogs,” Façade replied.
“Empress?”
“You don’t know yet?” Iuvenes enquired incredulously.
“They don’t have a hive link, Iuvenes,” Panacea reminded her daughter.
“Neither do we now!”
Shining sighed. “Can you please explain what is going on?”
“Before contact was lost, Queen Twilight believed the Empress of the Changelings was behind all of this,” Carduus explained. “She was going to propose this to the Council when everything happened.”
Broad Sword rubbed his chin. “I… wasn’t aware the changelings had an Empress.”
“We didn’t until recently,” Carduus replied. “At least, not for a long time.”
“Huh?”
“It’s an old legend,” the changeling continued. “I better explain it to your princesses, they need to know what they’re up against.”
“Hold on, are you certain this ‘Empress’ is what’s causing all of this?”
“Do you trust your own sister’s deduction skills?”
“Well… yes.”
“Then yes, I am.”
“I hate to interrupt, but what now?” Vladimir asked.
“Getting out of here would be a good start,” Façade remarked.
“Yeah, and who are you again?”
“Name’s Façade,” the changeling formally introduced himself. “Served under Queen Draco’s guard, protected the embassy in Canterlot until the Queen severed us. Then I came here, was joined to Queen Twilight’s hive, and then she disconnected me too. I also saved the free minds of this lot. Any more questions? Because, I mean, we really shouldn’t stay here.”
Vladimir blinked. “No, I think that answered my question well enough.”
“We have an extraction ready when needed,” Shining Armor stated. “You’re welcome to join us.”
“That would be appreciated,” Carduus said with a shrug. “I mean, if there’s room.”
Shining nodded for the group to follow him, and they all fell into step behind. Carduus stayed close to his family in the middle of the group while Broad Sword and Vladimir guarded the rear with Shining and Façade taking point. They began to take the most direct route to the hive’s exit, making no unnecessary detours.
“So,” Façade spoke up to Shining as they walked. “You’re Queen Twilight’s adoptive brother, right?”
“Just ‘brother’ will do,” Shining Armor replied. “But yes, I am.”
“Well, then I can only imagine how all this is for you. I’m sorry.”
“Thanks, I guess. What exactly happened here anyhow?”
“Several of the Empress’ thralls assaulted the hive soon after the Queen cut us all off,” Façade began to explain. “The entire hive was taken and the ponies killed. Queen Vulgaris led the assault, just as much of a thrall as the drones.”
“What about you lot, why are you still here?”
“The hive was in a frenzy, none of them were thinking straight with what happened. They could barely fight back let alone do something like hide,” Façade stated. “But this is my second time disconnecting, I was able to stay a little more level headed. I ran into Carduus and his family about to be assaulted by Vulgaris’ venomous little daughter, and I couldn’t let them be taken. After Imperious and her escort were fought off, I helped the family hide and wait it out.”
“And what of any other changelings?”
“We couldn’t help any others, we tried at one point and had to change hiding spots after that failure,” Façade said regretfully. “I was the only one of us capable of any real fighting, and I’m just one changeling.”
“I understand. You did what you could.”
“I hope so,” Façade muttered with a grimace. “But anyway, we managed to hold out until they all left. We’ve been here for the past week, using whatever food and such that was left behind to survive but were afraid to stray too far in case any sentries remained.”
“Well, it doesn’t seem like they bothered. This Empress has something different in mind for all those changelings.”
“Nothing good.”
“You think?”
After a little more travel, they successfully reached the exit and the bright sunlight was there to greet them in reward. They could all breathe a sigh of relief as they took in fresh air, some more so than others.
“I thought we’d never see the sun again!” Iuvenes stated. “Next time we should build a normal city.”
“I’m not giving up on the hive just yet,” Carduus said, glancing back down towards the hive. “Not after all the work we’ve put into it.”
“We’ve got to get the Queen back first,” Façade noted. “And that means getting back to the alicorns.”
“You’re sticking with us then?” Vladimir enquired.
“What? You think I’d run off once we reached the sunlight?”
“It was possible, you’re not part of Twilight’s hive.”
Façade shook his head. “Twilight Sparkle is… admirable; I mean, raised by ponies and then going on to defeating Crudelis and saving the world a couple times… Beyond that, I know the best way to help out with fixing this mess is going to be with you guys.”
The thestral snorted. “Right. Well then Façade, welcome to our merry little gang.”
And that puts my mind at ease that at least some lovable characters survived the devastation.
At least few little survived, but so many lost(for now?), not good at all.
Phew, no one (important) died, this time.
I'm going to be honest and say that the last few chapters have hurt this story for me. While I understand the need for comedy, the choices made...
I think what really bothered me was that Cadence had found out that her sister in law (one that she has know since she was a little filly) is either missing or captured and being controlled by the enemy and decides to yell at her husband rather than waiting till this was all over.
All ponies were mercilessly slaughtered. Changelings killed that had no will of their own. Less than a half-dozen survivors found. And the deaths will continue to rise until Immortalis is defeated and/or destroyed.
Can't wait for next week's chapter and keep up the great work. Now ball is rolling.
for some reason o shit just does not cover this.
this is going to turn in to a true war till this is all over and the loses are going to be huge on both sides.
Seems there was one pony down there at the statues who gave as good as they got. Being surrounded by the corpses of your enemies is a very honorable epitaph.
8194445
Wow, you're kind of short-sighted amigo. It's like you've never been in a high-tension situation before, where even getting yelled at by someone for a sense of normalcy helps so much with stress and worry.
8194740 In my head that pony was a guard on their day off.
And I'm gonna say yet again, something B-I-G is brewing!
Nice chapter, at least I'm glad that Carduus, his family, and the Facade guy survived the "takeover".
Hmm... this is troubling...
8194740
Guess you've never read any of my works.
As I said, I get the need for humor in these kinds of situations. I just feel like the scene with Cadence before was poorly timed perhaps better had it been right when Shining returned and Cadence was there waiting for him. As I said, Cadence knows that her sister in law is missing, many ponies died, and Vlad lost a wing. She should be counting her blessing that Shining wasn't one of those hurt and then focus on finding out what has happened to a member of her family. I don't think calling this shot sighted was the right call on your part
Even with the idea of normalcy, I have been in situations where I have thought that someone close to me was in danger. I watched my grandfather have a stroke before my eyes, watched my father get swept down stream, and other such things. The main thing I always thought was make sure my loved ones are alright and then, once the dust had settled, joked about it when all was well.
8195628
No I haven't, and the fact you still haven't corrected your statement and misused mine leads me to believe I would not be pleased to be a part of your readership. (Also, you ship Flashlight, so - you are are a reprehensible human being to me. Fight me, Sunlight or bust! )
It was not about humor for them. It was not a joke. It was humorous for the audience only. You have inappropriately conflated audience perception with in-world character perception. And your examples are based on 'immediate situations' while they were stuck with the far more tension-building 'waiting situation'. Which are well-documented as destroying nerves, sanity, and morale - often worked into battlefields to wear down the enemy, as a matter of fact, throughout history.
To break that tedium, knowing that both of them were fretting and fretting more and more, and knowing he was expecting a chewing out, she went ahead and DID that. Because it broke (or more likely, at least reset) that horribly-consuming twisty feeling of just not knowing over long periods of time, dreading the news that could come at any second, knowing that the longer it takes the WORSE the news you receive will be. Compounding more and more distress and worry and depression and guilt and anger. Cadence, through pure context, is written to be emotionally sensitive - she'd know this.
8196876
I am sorry I am a wretched human being because I give things a chance. I am sorry I spoke my mind, voicing it politely and you have sought to demean me.
The bit is still not humorous to be so I guess, like several people have suggested, I am a failed human being
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8194740
First of all, you have no right to judge someone for the ships they enjoy. That is narrow minded nor was it part of the subject that was brought up. I have read Darthvalgaav's stories which can get extremely dark yet can also pull some good humor in it to relieve tension, something a non-creator like you most likely knows nothing about. Despite what your page says, I doubt you can even craft an engaging paragraph let alone a full story.
I find your comment to be rather short sighted and simple minded. I agree that the scene was meant to break tension, but does so in the wrong. What is happening to Twilight is in the now and for all they know thrall Twilight could be giving the enemy all they need to know with a smile on her face, being raped to produce more changelings, marching on with an army of changelings to kill innocent ponies, and so forth. Cadence trying to act like normal might have worked better if there was some payoff with her talking to Celestia afterwords instead of another joke or her saying she can't believe that this has really happened or so on. At least in the following chapter the characters had the excuse of being drunk and trying to think back to founder times.
In short: TIME AND PLACE MATTER IN A STORY
because of this I have to give this story a downvote as well as for it being followed by people like you
8197556 OK, it's fair enough some people don't like that part, even if I don't agree it's their opinion. But disliking the story because someone you don't like follows it, seriously?
I was a bit more understanding until that part. Not cool dude.
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8196876
Guys, this has gone too far. Stop.
8197648
Ah, so that's it. You are only getting involved not because of verbal insult, but because I disliked the story. I bet you didn't give a damn if the insults between them continued or anything else I said because it would have given you more comments.
Now I wish I could give this story another one
8197842 Actually, I was getting involved because I got private messaged about it. It had gone too far and I told them to stop, and I also responded to what you said. Any further insults traded between them on here will be deleted.
I'm trying to be diplomatic, just stop the bashing here and now.
Interesting start to act II! I like the introduction of this facade character, he seems like just the "sarcastic but still understanding of how bad the situation is" kind of guy after the loss of Longshot. Though I've got to question when you got so unoriginal with changeling names, facade... Really?
And though I'm sad that this story has to come to a close I'm interested in how it's all coming together. Can't wait for next week!
8197890
Then let me ask you this: what would have happened if you had never gotten a pm? My guess would have been nothing.
I gave this story a downvote not only because of what that Starlight loving idiot said but also because I really hated that chapter for the reasons I listed.
8197439
You don't seem to be the sort of person who gets when someone is making light of a matter, so I'll spell it out for you.
That was a joke. The common sort we make in this fandom and have for years. You were not meant to take it seriously. There was even an emoticon. An attempt at levity. To show that despite my words there's no real hard feelings, and that debates are a normal and common part of community.
I trust you understand now. Either way, dealing with you has turned out to be very unpleasant despite my attempts to show you there was no bad blood between us even with a difference in opinion. So, in accordance with the wishes of the author I am calling this finished on my end. No more arguing. No more discussion. I wish you well.
8197556
I invite you to take your issue to my PMs if you have a problem. For that matter, I'm fairly sure you're an alt. Unless you wish to be reported for this sort of transgression (harassing using multiple accounts) I ask that you take your issue with me away from this story and stop attacking an unrelated and innocent person. Do not respond further in this thread.
Tom, some users (and indeed some staff) would give you guff for deleting posts. If it means anything I am stating plainly and openly for anyone to see that you have my full cooperation to delete offending posts of mine and I apologize that this person and either lackey or secondary account have had a bad reaction to what was a bit of generous ribbing, discussion, and attempt at no-harm-done banter. While I cannot control that, and I am not responsible for the problems of others, I still apologize to you for my part in this.
8198489
Had I not gotten pms on Discord and my Wow account, I would have agreed. However, it got so bad that I had to delete one account and put us several blocks on the other. It also felt like you were making it personal when you looked up my groups and made a comment about it.
Now, I don't blame you for these off site insults since you were direct. I fear some people have far too much free time on their hands. I will move on and say nothing further on this subject. I'll also thank you for being first to extend the olive branch. However, next time you a temp ribbing, please try to keep in mind that I can not hear your voice nor am I able to discern your intent when you look things up about me.
8198513 Thanks, and don't worry about it. I'm not annoyed at you specifically, just that the situation got to where it did.
Let's just move on from it, eh?
8198569
I am also sorry for how things blew up. I will refrain from making any more comments
Honestly, right at this moment I am a little afraid The Deathlings could be re-awoken...
Also this graphical update to fimfiction.net is an pleasant surprise
Dude, I feel like I'm reading an alternate version of the script to Halo: Reach right now. Except instead of putting a couple missions in between Kat getting brained by a Jackal sniper and Jorge manually detonating the Slipspace bomb, you've gone and nuked half of Noble Team with a Glassing Cannon. And yet, I still want to see how it ends...
Dammit... this story is addicting!