• Member Since 27th Jul, 2014
  • offline last seen Jul 31st, 2020

SmokeShadow95


Just a creative brony who has a lot of ideas and likes to write some of them out.

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The third and final story in the Origin Chronicles trilogy.

Many years have passed since the Darkness threatened all of Equestria. These have been years of peace and joy. Luna and Spike have married and had a daughter, Star Shadow. For a while, everything is wonderful.
However, there a still a Darkness, slumbering in the depths of Equestria. Unfortunately, only young Star Shadow herself can face this Darkness. Can she overcome her own past, her own emotions, and stand up to face this threat? Or will she succumb and lead the Darkness across the land herself?

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 23 )

I'm glad to see the story goes on

Love the chapter. Also her friend seems like an interesting filly.

I love this trilogy! Only thing about this story is I wish I knew what star looked like. I don't know if I missed the description or not but it would definately be cool if even though she looks like a normal unicorn, she has sharp teeth or some semblance to a dragon!

7281782 there will be a physical description later on. I promise. I just gotta to that scene and write it out. Unfortunately I'm going through a phase of having absolutely no feeling to write as of late.

7285287 Don't worry man, I know exactly how you feel. You've already done two 100 K + word stories that prefaced this which were incredible. Take your time and work your magic, it will all be worth it when you get your grove back!

What filly are you not entertained?

I think the storybook is a good idea for a present.

Light and Shadow have come face to face.

Are my two favorite characters dead?

So my boy and favorite princess are dead well shit.

Ha I know it Twilight killed Spike because she couldn't have Luna and left her book as a clue.

So is it the return of Ruby Thorn?

So Ebony is alive and way is that Luna? Should have killed her when you had the chance. I made a mistake I called her Ruby Thorn, I meant Ebony rose.

Starshadow could really use the storybook that Spike wanted to give her, so she knows exactly how she's following.

Well Talon and Runner sound like fun.

Oh not much just blasted mid teleport is all so what's for dinner?

So Spike died and became soul bound with his daughter?

is this story gonna revive anytime soon?

10228925
I think it's dead sadly.

11480530
Lol I completely forgot about this story until you replied to my comment from 2 years ago. Nice to know that you're still alive and kicking.

11481938
I'M not dead yet lol. I have a tone of stories to get through yet thats why I'M still here.

11482036
Ah the good motivation of not done yet. My mom has a dog that's 18 years old and we're pretty sure it's still alive due to spite and crankiness.

11482068
sounds like typical old age to me. you get to a point where you don't die just because you wanna spite some one else.

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