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Color Spark


I'm a Soarindash, Fluttercord, Flashlight (don't judge me), Applespike/ThunderJack, Raripants, Cheesepie, the list goes on and on... shipper. I also write stories with way too much dialogue in them...

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This story is a sequel to A Mother's 'Love'


Extra Tag: Weird
Written with permission by Deadpansnarker. An alternate ending to "A Mother's 'Love'", once it gets finished. For now, it's a side story. She gets sent to St. Whinneans, a brutal college that basically abuses foals. Not kidding. With the help of... someone, or some creature, and her new friends, she gets out of the place safely, but she isn't going to leave without a little... revenge, won't she? And I am bad at making long descriptions.
Rated Teen for a bit of abuse, but nothing too graphic
Cover image is NOT used with permission, but here is where I found it: http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Spoiled_Rich/Gallery

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 27 )

Glad to see your story up. You never know, though. There might still be an ending like this to my fic. You'll just have to follow it, and find out... P.S Don't forget to add an 'Alternate Universe' tag please... :scootangel:

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NEED UPDATE NOW :flutterrage:!!! I've been waiting for ages without any new content... :fluttercry: And the AU tag has been added.

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So true. And thanks for reading! :pinkiehappy:

And I am bad at making long descriptions.

Got an issue in the short one as well...

However, the CMC their new friend will do everything they can to stop this.

Not sure if it should be "...CMC will help their new friend do everything..." or "...CMC will do everything they can...". Probably the latter, I imagine ;)

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:twilightsheepish: to be honest, I'm pretty bad at making descriptions in general... thanks for the feedback, though.

And yes, it is the latter :twilightsmile:

I'm confused by that a lot..... How can you write a sequel for a story that isn't finished yet (and apparently, even far from being so)? :rainbowhuh:

There were times when I think that my mother was bad but this were before this place... Now... It's hard to remember this hell. All I have is this bag of my items and this present from my "friend". He promised that when things goes awry all I need to use it. And I used it.
Some thoughts of description.
Sorry for bad English.

7022095 It is waiting for you now. All you have to do is log in. :scootangel:

7023296 Why not? I'm just hoping it's a happy ending. If you want sequels for an unfinished story you should check out Calm Wind's Piercing the Heavens. That fic has over 120 chapters, not complete yet but it already has a lot of sequels. (sorry if this seems a little blunt, it's just me)

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Sequels are continuations of stories. Follow-ups to stories that were once told to show what happened after they ended.
You can't continue a story without the story having an end where you can pick everything up.
Writing a "sequel" for a story that is perhaps only half finished is like reading the first part of a book trilogy, then stopping at the middle of it and continue reading with part two.
Logically speaking, writing a sequel for a story that is not over yet is impossible. What you wrote here would be more accurately described as a sidefic. But even that term brings up problems as your story is clearly set in the future.
Long story short, you can't continue something that isn't over yet. It's creating a logical fallacy.
My brain already hurts from just thinking about it. :applejackconfused:
And don't worry about being blunt with me. I'm more blunt than most people like.

7025646 Good point. But logical paradoxes are everywhere anyway. Now that you mention it, it is more of a sidefic. I'll write that in the description. Thanks for the feedback, though :twilightsmile:.

7024581 OMG YAS MUST GO CHECK IT OUT NOW
*reads*
Oh Angel. I really wonder if they were planning on calling the bunny Satan (if you are Christian and I offended you, sorry 'bout that) but the producers changed it to make it more kid friendly.

I have the perfect solution for both sides. Tiara found the magic puddle, makes a clone of herself, send it at the boarding school instead of her, live happily wherever she wants free of her mother and let the clone fulfill Spoiled's dreams. Definitely best end. :pinkiehappy:

Let's see where this ride is going. :twilightsmile:

7025713 Considering they changed the name of 'Derpy' to 'Muffins' because of roughly a handful of complaints, I'd say that was a pretty safe bet.

And don't worry about me being religious. I do say OM G a lot though, it that counts. :trollestia:

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But logical paradoxes are everywhere anyway.

If I would have time for that now, I would ensue to a lecture about how things that happen often are not necessarily good things and how something can't be properly decided or determined by a majority doing it, but since I don't have time for it, I just leave it with the notion that said circumstance is just further proof for it that Earth was created by Discord.

7026548 That certainly is a possible solution, but I have something else that involves a little more.. chaos...:scootangel:
7031494 Thanksss! :pinkiehappy: and no, I'm not a snake.

It's going to be interesting to see what the school is like. I love to see Discord playing around at the place :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks~! :pinkiehappy: And no there will not be spoilers... there will not be snobby mothers after chapter 3... there will not be any "quiet" chapters... but chaos? DEFINITELY :pinkiecrazy:

I really like this version. The CMC and Discord seem really on point and well done. I can't wait to see what you do with this premise.

And we are off to the horror show...:fluttershbad:
I love Pink Pie and I love the no gods reference, I never did understand poeple viewing Celestia as a god or even sticking references of some kind (like cursing,ect.) of God into MLP espeasilly since the show doesn't have those kinds of refences.

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It annoys me a lot, too. I have nothing against religion or anything (I'm atheist though), but there's literally no evidence in the show to support this God thing. When they make all the characters OOC so that they're religious, it tends to bug me a lot. I don't really like OOC characters, unless it's funny. Cursing doesn't have to be religious, though.

7194244 Actually lol I'm an athiest too, so I never did get that. Yes I love cursing actaully as well, wish I could use it more often but I'm aware it doesn't have to be religious. I have just noticed that when this fandom uses it, it is always in refences to some type of God.

Mostly then use it to drag you to them when they need to punish you. Wear these dresses instead; I enchanted them so they will repel any sort of magic a unicorn uses on you.

Funny enough, I have an headcanon that her headpiece is enchanted to repel magic, because her family is rich hence she is prone to be kidnap. She needs protection against overpowered unicorn magic. :twilightsheepish:

7204074 Cool! I had to enchant something, because I am obsessed. The tiara was destroyed in the 'canon' of the fic, so I couldn't enchant that... So I resorted to the dresses. Why not?

I enjoy this story and the original but am going to assume it has been abandoned. Therefore, I'm going to imagine my own story for this story.

How about...

St. Whinneans is a pun for St. Trinians, and there has been a total staff overhaul since her mother went to the school, but apart from locally, the school still has its old reputation. Nowadays the students get up to tons of bedlam, and Diamond is going to have a great time at the school. She'll end up sending a letter home telling everyone not to worry, and then the school will almost be closed down for a lack of regulation :P

If this was not how you meant the story to end then please update it :P

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