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Dark Chocolate


Converting daydreams into stories helps me pretend to be human.

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There are four realms: A good and bad of both pony and human universes. Each universe has its own unique tree with its own elements that it may grant when it feels the need. Unfortunately, they don't always communicate.


Written completely 100% out of canon. This short story takes my main OC Raiden from King of the Dead, and puts him at the mercy of the trees guarding their elements in every realm. As a brief miscommunication occurs, it lands him with more elements than he can handle.
LOTS OF FOUL LANGUAGE!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

When Tree's Collide

What do the trees have?

7218929 It's in the description. There's one tree for each realm, and each tree has 6 elements they can grant to any being.

7218975 I wasn't actually asking what the trees have lol. Tree's is the possessive form, and in the case of your title, is improper. Your title should not have the apostrophe in it.

7218981 Oh God damnit XD Thanks

7219004 No problem haha. Also, the two "it's" you have in your description should be its. The way you have it now reads as "it is". Lastly: "it landings him" sounds weird, so it should be lands instead of landings.

7219025 Ya I never proofread it. It didn't pass moderation a few month ago so I recently reworked it and forgot to check everything.

7219025 God I need to slow down when I type. For some reason I just habitually put an apostrophe when it's possessive.

...This is undoubtly the best thing in the history of ever XD

well then

7220636 Thank you for your eloquently worded review!

7220665 I sorry I just don't know what to say.
It was very fun to read.

7220668 I'm assuming from the favorite you at least enjoyed it. I apologize my sarcastic comment was suppose to be taken as a joke. I hope I didn't come across as rude.

It's like happy tree friends and mlp had a love child.

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