This story is a sequel to The Adventures of Batsy Fluffentuft the Magnificent
Wherein Batsy Fluffentuft magnificently pursues a mysterious, shiny pale pinking-purple propeller-powered pony! Will she catch it? She must, for the propeller is SHINY! No, not the unicorn Shiny...
Guest starring:
Discord's Daughter, Screwball!
A Cabbage Merchant!
Lots of Trees!
Vegetable Chow Mein!
AND
Background Pony Number Seven (of Nine)! (that's a double joke, get both answers and win an Internet!)
Music by Benny Hill, as performed by 331Erock!
Another entry into ocalhoun's contest! I swear, the instant coffee is gonna drive me to ruin.
But I made pony words with it. So, there's that!
Chapters (1)
Not exactly the same feel as the original.
Hilarious nonetheless. It's simply a different flavor of hilarious.
Have an upvote. You deserve it.
7060747 Thanks!
I believe this is what you are referring to:
Not too bad. Kind of an amusing attempt.
7061030 You're right, but I can't change it till after the contest, if I read the rules right.
Nobodynopony expects thespanishroyal inquisition!7069683
Yup! Although I couldn't have Batsy leave the scene and come back in again. Had this been a Pinkie Pie fiction, I might have.
Now, who should be Biggles and Fang?
You realize you called her "Betsy" at one point?
7155427 It's not my fault....
It's a typo. I blame Trixie.
Will fix it.
Thanks!
Batsy is pretty hard to get just right... and I think this one falls short a little. Just something about the 'ooh shiny!' strikes me as a bit too scatterbrained. Something's also odd about the occasional present tense. And then there's the narrative, which skips back and forth as much as Screwball does. That said, this is a pretty fun idea to work with, and I'm tempted to steal the idea of her leaving a bowl on top of a roof for somepony else to clean up. Oh, and the cabbages, of course. That made me snort.
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A review for ocalhoun's big 250k contest.
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absolutely funny in its own right
Seven of Nine, tertiary adjunct unit of uni-matrix zero one.
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Indeed! You win an internet, and a moustache.
There's another famous Number Seven no one has mentioned though.
Honestly I didn't really enjoy this one. I like random as much as the next schuck, hence why Pinkie Pie is my favorite pony, still, that was almost too much to keep up with.
My favorite part was the cabbages. That man cannot catch a break in any universe.
Definitely worth the read. Thanks!
Loved it.