Average Joe is a simple pony. Entrancing Voice is a seductive hypnotist. Entrancing Voice realizes he hasn't attempted his powers on Average Joe... and tries to do so casually at a bar.
Rated T for... mentions of potentially naughty things. But nothing is actually done.
Well, even I'm bewildered: How could Joe not be falling over swooning with lines like that? Boggles the mind.
this an interesting read all does i would have wish that it went feather with the idea.
and in Trance's description:
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Bravo, sir. Bravo.
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I am not good at clop.
Lovely expansion of the concept, though it definitely needs a chapter 2 with some more traditional mind control.