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Revenant Wings


"The world is a looking-glass, and gives back to every man the reflection of his own face." - William Makepeace Thackeray, Vanity Fair. Admin of LGBT, somewhat obsessed with Crash Bandicoot.

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Average Joe is a simple pony. Entrancing Voice is a seductive hypnotist. Entrancing Voice realizes he hasn't attempted his powers on Average Joe... and tries to do so casually at a bar.

Rated T for... mentions of potentially naughty things. But nothing is actually done.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Well, even I'm bewildered: How could Joe not be falling over swooning with lines like that? Boggles the mind. :derpytongue2:

this an interesting read all does i would have wish that it went feather with the idea.

He has a job at a local store, working an in-store coffee stand

and in Trance's description:

and a cutie mark of a triangle with an eye pulsating rings out the top.

cough

Bravo, sir. Bravo.

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I am not good at clop. :twilightsheepish:

Lovely expansion of the concept, though it definitely needs a chapter 2 with some more traditional mind control.

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