Rainbow has been crushing on Pinkie since they were kids. When certain circumstances happen will she find the courage to confess her feelings? Or will she fail and remain wishing from the sidelines. This story is completely humanized.
Prologue and Chapters 1 and 2 edited. Will be posting more chapters soon. Sorry for the wait. ^.^''
A bit rushed perhaps, but still has promise
i really like the concept of this! very good
you better keep working on this becouse i need to continue it
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It was a bit rushed cause I couldnt think of any good pranks. Never been the kind to pull off a good prank.
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Thanks. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. It might get crazy, I'm writing it as I go.
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Well, i just put up chapter 3 so there's your more.
This story may be short, but I am really enjoying it! Please do more chapters! Have a fav and a thumbs up! And I have to admit, I got a little misty-eyed as I read those last few lines of chapter 3. There were a few grammar and spelling errors, but they didn't bother me. You have potential as a writer! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks. And I'm sorry about the errors but I'm writing this on my phone so it's kind of hard to edit it.
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It's quite all right.
Great Start To A Story FlyingBlade
Tho It Was Short But It Was Enjoyable!
Your Getting Great At Story Telling I Pinkie Promise Cross My Heart And Hope To Fly Stick A Cupcake In My Eye.
By The Way Have You Noticed That In The Chant That It Says "Hope To Fly" And Pinkie And Dash Are The Ones Who Invented Nick Names For Each Other Such As Dashie And Pinks. Shipping Fuel!