Hey all, I've been a fan of MLP for over a year now, my favorite characters are Applejack, Sunset Shimmer and Rainbow Dash
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This story is a sequel to Runaway
*****Update*****
Ok, I got all of the chapters edited and reposted, yay.
Lily and Moonshade find themselves free of the horrors of their past, or so they think. As Celestia, Luna, Chrysalis and Posey struggle to find a way to keep them free and happy Sunset and gang work on getting Moonshade to open up and learn to trust again.
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Cute. Can't wait to see more.
7012174 glad you like the chapter, I definitely enjoyed writing most of it
Good into! I get the feeling that Lily Bloom is going to have a lot of troubles with what happened to her. Moonshade has her anger issues but they can be worked through now how these kids begin to heal?
Good development for Lily here. So how will they'd handle the craziness of Canterlot High School?
7052390 that is a few months into the future and I haven't even planned that far ahead.
Also I've been working on a pic for Lily inspired by the first chapter, I hope you like it.
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Ok guys, I just finished a picture of Lily inspired by the first chapter of the story.
http://kixbrooks.deviantart.com/art/Lily-Bloom-bikergirl-598798513
It is Lex Luthor? He is bald. Or you is it Agent 47, the guy from Hitman?
7092251 lol, you shall see. What did you think of the chapter?
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Not bad! I get the feeling that Celestia, Luna, Sunset, and Chrissy are not going to be very neighborly if their neighbor is someone who hurt Nightshade and Lily.
I can see Crissy going all Oracle on the bad cops. For those who may not know Oracle is an affiliate of Batman and depending on the continuity the former Batgirl Barbarba Gordan. She can destroy the entire internet if you piss her off. Every surveillance camera, internet connected device, a direct connection to the Batcomputer, and Justice League databank is at her figure tips. Piss her off at your own risk.
Yes Moonshade needs to talk to a professional soon. I also approve that Sunset started with Rarity and Applejack, Pinkie and Rainbow Dash would have caused more problems for Moonshade and Fluttershy would have been to meek to say no to her. I some how dread the Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo meeting Lily, if those three are anything like their pony counterparts this could be very funny!
7203690 well, they may or may not run into them soon, depending on what happens
Update soon. Also, do you think I could make you an oc for a love interest for MoonShade?
7230300 I will be starting the next chapter soon, as for the love interest, I appreciate the idea but at this point she has no interest in falling in love. The only person she likes right now is Lily. But when/ if it does get to that point I won't object to possible ideas.
7230312 I already figured it wouldn't be in this fic. I meant in a future fic if you said yes. Normally, at this point I would ask for you to at least add some of my ocs from my 'Circus of the Fall' on https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11623925/2/The-Circus-of-Fall, but they are made to work in pony form. So I'm not sure how they would do it in human form.
7230321 I might have an idea already on how to cameo them in, though it won'the be for a couple chapters or in the next story
Will there be any fighting in this story?
So Lily got to meet the Crusaders! I wonder how the equivalent of cutie marks work in this world? As it looks like everyone has some variation on their cutie mark somewhere on the clothing. It makes me wonder what Lily and Moonshade's would be?
7230503 maybe, you shall see. Why are asking for a fight scene and which character would you like to see get in a fight?
7230798 if you look on Moon's belt and Lily's boots you'll see their marks, as for the cmc, that is a good question
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Ok, I am stuck on a tablet and cannot zoom in on the picture.
7230979 ok, Moonshade's mark is a yellowish moon with a shadowy cloud in front of it. As for Lily it is a white Lily flower
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Cool. Thanks for the rest info!
7231114 you're welcome. If you want to see their pony forms go to DeviantArt, user name KixBrooks
So the healing begins. I get the feeling that by the end Applejack will be her best friend as Lily is her sister.
This was a great chapter. I agree, talking about our troubles helps lighten our load.
7253324 I actually got the idea for this story as I was watching Harry Potter, though the original way it started was the four of them would be watching the movie, though under a different name, and Moon was going to flip out in the beginning cause she never read the series before.
7253381 yes it does, and I have the next three or four chapters mapped out, loosely, so there is room for other ideas and whatnot.
7253391 Have you thought of a way to add my 'Circus of the Fall' characters yet? That's all I want to know.
7253596 yep, and I know you said they do performances during Halloween I have a different idea for that. But yes I do have an idea, though it won't happen till the next story in the series.
7253773 Great, I'll try to wait until then. It well be hard though.
Wow, heavy chapter.
I get the feeling that Lily will take the longest to heal. Hopefully her parents and the corrupt cop get their just deserts soon!
7271031 what makes you think that?
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For Lily, how deep her betrayal was. As for the others being very hopeful.
Good to see that both girls have begun the first steps on their road to recovery. Looking forward to the next installment!
7285074 I got something special in mind for the opening chapter, hope you and the others like it.
So Luna is a game addict ... Interesting
7780187 thanks, I actually like the idea of gamer Luna
7780384 When I find a version of a character I like, I always seem to find a better one.