• Member Since 7th Jun, 2012
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cajun brony94


just a guy with some writing skills who likes ponies, if you have any questions fell free to ask

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Daring Doo has been away from her adventurers for over a year. Until now, she must find a blood ruby lost in an ancient tomb before a money crazed crime lord gets to it. Will she find the long lost blood ruby of king Orion before Heinrich Ponyzeit will, or will she die trying, find out in this exciting, thrilling story: Daring Doo and the Bleeding Stone. I am Open for criticism and commentary.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 17 )

This fan fiction is probably the most sophisticated and well-written fan fiction i have ever read. Notice, i have only one forum post which is this one. This is also the first fan fiction i have ever read. However, isnt this all about having fun rather than criticizing others' work? Can't we all just get along? In the words of Martin Luther King Jr.; I am in need of toiletpaper. Im sure he said that at least once, anyways. However, yes, to borrow a phrase from John Hancock; "the sophistication of this story has bewildered the fact of knowing the ethnicity of all-knowning filanthropoligists, but i digress. Also, donuts are tasty." These are the words of a man with a signature. Who are we to judge and criticize?
Which brings us to star trek, and the wrath of kahn. Is NO ONE ESLE creeped out about those weird worm things crawling into other peoples ears? I mean, find a different way to hypnotize people, and get a haircut. That way, you may look a bit appealing. To borrow a phrase from Matt Damon: "I bought a zoo."
While we are on the subject of zoos, chimpanzees are almost humans, correct? So why do we put them in cages. I mean, they could probably eat a doughnut themselves, right? I mean, thats all that make us humans. Who are we to hid e them away in cages? To borrow a phrase from kermit the frog: "Hi!" but i digress.
On the subject of "Hi" I was once senteced to court for being so. Shortly before court, i took quite the dumparoonie. It took 2 and a half Toilet paper rolls to cleanse my Feces-Ridden arse from highly fragrant fecal matter, and i was in there for easily 6 hours. After i excited, i had to hurry b ecause i was 5 hours 53 minutes late, and thought i could still make it if i ran. I entered the courtoom while a puppet was on trial for a sexual offense to a quite large amount of Scottish Terriers, and when i got there, everyone burst into laughter upon seeing i was wearing No clothes at all but my shoelaces as a tie, and had 3 feet of toilet paper on my foot. Granted, i should not have been high on the date i was being sentenced for being so, but i hadnt had anything to eat, was bored and had just recently clipped my toenails.
Which brings us to Steve Carell, otherwise known as Michael Scott, and the famous "That's What She Said" Joke. This joke never gets old, and is always gut-wrenchingly knee-slappingly hysterical.
Examples of this joke are:
Someone is drinking from a straw. You: "Thats what she said."
Someone says "This wood tastes great." You: "Thats what she said."
Someone laughs at these jokes and says, "Again, again!" You reply, "Thats what she said."

Therefore, it is predicamental that you reply witht he utmost honesty and sophistication in the light of this story, and i hope you will all meet a friendly Triceratops one day. I bid thee good night.

-RainbowdashEpicness (Don't Worry everything made sense)

Great story! You should write more, this is getting more interesting by the second! don't I know you from somewhere? Oh, now I know! Some author on Fanfiction.net said that I should read this! I agree with them! This story is awesome! I have one question.

HOW do ponies fire a gun? Do they all of a sudden have apposable thumbs?

I'm just asking. sorry if you take offense to this. i just always wanted to know because in other fanfics I read, they use guns too. Just a question that came to mind.

and RainbowdashEpicness, are you on Fanfiction.net?

819739 the guns I added for the simple reason, that Indiana Jones had a revolver, and this is a fic that is a huge homage to Indianan Jones. but explaining how they hold guns would...................be imposable :rainbowlaugh: but seriously thanks a lot I just hope you don't mind I take about a month to write whole chapters

It's fine, it just dawned on me.

I'm new to posting my stories online. I also have a Fanfiction.net account named Rainbow Lily. I only have my crossover, but I will put my MLP:FiM stories here, as well as Fanfiction.net.
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830604 Good to see you Rainbow Lily :D

830604 well I wish you luck with your stories, and thanks for injoying mine
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Good fic. But seriously... HOW DO PONIES HOLD GUNS?!

I'm guessing Zecora or unicorn magic is behind this.

It begins....

1163963 yes I know its a bad fic, I'm gonna finish it anyway

me gusta cajun

not a bad fic

looking forward to more of it!:rainbowkiss:

Hey hey hey cajun, its me, Cadence. Or should i call you Aero. :3 Nice to see you and your story again! Keep writing your doing good!:pinkiehappy:

1366767 hello Cadence. cant talk much now I got bed, and school, but you can have this :heart:

Really loving what I see right here, Aero. I'll be heading to bed shortly, but I'll get onto reading the rest when I finish College tomorrow.
Keep it up, it looks amazing so far. :heart:

ponies are telling me my story is good, while in their underwear? :D

Your extensive use of commas concerns me, Cajun.

It is a good story and I am working on a Daring Do story as well, so I know that this is a pretty good story. This story has my like, but sadly I don't have the time to continue to read it. :twilightsheepish:

Good luck! :derpytongue2:

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