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Mischievous Blue

For the starlight, for the twilight, for the distant fate of us all. For the sunlight, for the moonlight, she will fight the battle of time.

Mischievous Blue Joined 3rd Jul, 2014 · Offline

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NorrisThePony
NorrisThePony #1 · Mar 6th, 2016 · · ·
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Alrighty, first of all, lemme just say that you've done something very neat that I haven't seen done before—continuing Fluttershy's relationship with Philomena post-Bird In a Hoof. I really like the idea of Fluttershy pet-sitting for Celestia every once and awhile. That's super cute. :twilightsmile:

My only real complaint here is that you kinda just grazed over Fluttershy's emotions during the dying phoenix scene. It felt as though she came to her "everything dies" realization without a whole lot of consideration or thought.

But that's a nitpicky gripe. Nice little one-shot, I enjoyed this.

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