Fang of Sorrow

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Whiskeylullaby

Whiskeylullaby #1 · Mar 7th, 2016 · · · A start to destiny ·

Awesome. I Hope to see more.

TheGreatPandaKing

TheGreatPandaKing #2 · Mar 7th, 2016 · · · A start to destiny ·

7005810 I'll be sure to oblige.

Buchernov2012

Buchernov2012 #3 · Mar 30th, 2016 · · · A start to destiny ·

Only 3 words THS S AWSM

... Nah that won't do. The start is excellent the plot too, however I hate seeing texts merged together, it's hard to separate each paragraph when it's written together.
All in all I give give this story 9/10 IGN. But still, this story is awsm too!

TheGreatPandaKing

TheGreatPandaKing #4 · Mar 30th, 2016 · · · A start to destiny ·

7078071 Huzzah I smeared Duke Nukem Forever in the ratings! The next part should be done soon.

Whiskeylullaby

Whiskeylullaby #5 · Apr 5th, 2016 · · · A Baptism of Blood ·

Dude, the opening bit repeats like twice. should probably fix that...

TheGreatPandaKing

TheGreatPandaKing #6 · Apr 5th, 2016 · · · A Baptism of Blood ·

7096451 There we go, fixed it. It was a screw up from copy and pasting stuff from my typewriter app to Google Docs. I forgot the second page. Fixed now. Now I need a shot.