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So edgy. Edgy and cringey.
7002034 2edgy 4u?
I wasn't paying too much attention to tags or the title, so the last part kinda caught me by surprise. In other words, DAFUQ JUST HAPPENED?
7002089 Shit happened. And that's just a prologue.
7002091
Oh god. Well, you sir have caught my attention with this story so far. Props to you.
7002096 Well, that's quite unbelievable, considering the wall of (already expected) downvotes I'm receiving.
But it's okay, good to know I have your attention here.
7002101
Really? For me, it's not showing any up or down votes. Also says 0 views, which I know is a lie. Don't know what's up with that. Besides, the story as a whole is already different compared to others things I've read, so it's kinda refreshing. I'm also not the best critic ever, if I even am one. I just base things on whether I enjoy them or not most of the time rather than whether they're actually good or not.
7002109 There was an update some time ago, and now stories only show ratings after ten positive or negative votes.
7002117
I see. Makes sense, I guess. By the way, since there is only one chapter currently and I can't make an estimation based on update dates, do you have any idea as to when there will be another chapter? Sorry, if it seems a bit quick or anything, since this was just posted today.
7002123 Well, it depends. Soon probably, I wrote this chapter earlier today, so It won't take very long.
7002130
Nice. Thanks a lot. Again, interested to see where this whole thing goes, and also how it apparently involves Chrysalis.
7002135 You're welcome!
well shit did not see that coming damn, but im interested to see where this goes
7002194 Well, I guess no one saw such a tremendous amount of shit coming.
U have my attention. :P
7002274 I am creeped out and flattered at the same time.
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This is enticing. I will continue to read it.
7002312 Peculiar... Thank you.
7002338 you're welcome. So you think I'm peculiar?
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7002360 Well, everyone who thinks this story is enticing, is surely peculiar.
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7002370 You have a point.
I just wanted to see a romance story with Gore. Good work. Maybe I could make a sequel of I Need Meat! where Mark fall's for pinkie.
7002403 I was feeling kinda crazy today, so I decided to write something and see what happened. Well, this happened.
I should probably write more chapters before this psychopathic feeling fades away.
Also, good luck with your stories.
7002413 thanks. You too. Sometimes we need to let the villans do there biz so we don't have to deal with them later.
7002205 well i know i didnt
Is the guy under a spell?
7003894 That's the thing, who is under a spell?
7003905 you clever sob.
I suggest going back and looking through chapter 2 (and possibly 1). I found a few grammatical errors that aren't the worst I've ever seen, but still.
7003930 I will.
Any tips?
7003936
As far as I could tell, it was simple stuff like using 'no' instead of 'not' and even 'murderer' instead of 'murder,' so I'm not really sure what to say in the way of tips.
You lost me. I don't know what's happening anymore. D:!
this story looks good. waiting for more
So far so good, i dont know who could even think of disliking this masterpiece in process.
damn, i want encore
holy shit, that's not what i meant when i said i wanted "head"
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Shame on you sir!! Shame!
7632843 couldn't help myself, srry
Either cadance is under some kind of spell or she I'd actually chrysalis who replaced cadance and is acting all yandere-like to the main character or this is actually the main characters dream/illusion and he is actually insane OR it is actually what I think it is and cadance is a yandere who has used some kind of love spell but it failed.
So many possibilities, but no definitive one.
Well... the last part of this chapter certainly makes up for the following story:
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She's freaking terrifying in this fic! I mean, people were complaining about her in
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but she's TERRIFYING in this!
oh Pony, that escalated quickly
i hope, that we can see more from this in the future
Idk man. I say just roll with it. Take that cute flank of Cadence and enjoy this helish ride
This story is interesting. I wander if this story will continue
I'm not even 2 paragraphs in and there's 2 grammar errors