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"If you only write when you're inspired you'll be a fairly decent poet, but you'll never be a novelist."

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Trixie decides to run some errands after her show in Ponyville. She runs into some fans and helps out a yellow mare at the marketplace. There they have a conversation about her show.

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It was a cute little story. Needed a little editing, but that's all.

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Thank you. I agree that it needs editing but, I can only do so much as I have no help with such things. A writer rarely catches all mistakes. If there are such writers then I definitely need a lot more practice.

Hmm. Didn't Trixie treat Snips and Snails kind bad even after her show? I remember something like that, when they brought her a smoothie. She was very dismissive even then.

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Well, to be honest, it has been a while since I have seen the episode but, this story is about how her whole identity as the Great and Powerful Trixie is just a mask she wears. I wanted to show the possibility that Trixie could have just been using it as a way to deal with hecklers and not crushing the imaginations of children yet, still being a rather normal pony. I'll have to watch the episode again since you brought this up, though. I felt like binge watching the series again anyways with Season 6 coming out soon.

And then you realise even though she had a cordial conversation with Fluttershy, Trixie is still going to get her cart demolished and her reputation ruined anyways.

Well, at least there's a reason why Fluttershy doesn't get abused much in Magic Duel.

This was a great story. I think it's awesome whenever someone goes against the normal ideas most people have.

Only tomorrow in Ponyville never came for Trixie. The only things that would come for her would be facing a dangerous predator, losing her home and possessions, untold humiliation, and scorn. All of this was waiting for her in the morning along with no sympathy and no friends.

In other words, she is stripped of everything that ever meant anything to her.

Thank you. This is what was originally supposed to be in the cartoon.

And the moral, apparently, is that sometimes after what happened, there just won't be time for conversations and apologies. Unfortunately, this happens in life:ajsleepy:

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