Confound these wretched equines! For every one I fling away, a dozen more vex me!
A lone pony sits in the rain, staring at a house. Inside dwells a pony she has hurt, a pony who means more to her than she would ever have thought possible. Maybe the damage can be undone, if she can find the nerve to speak to him.
Maybe...
A P!nk Pony Tale inspired by P!nk's song "Please Don't Leave Me", starring everyone's my favorite pink pony.
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That's so sad.
That part with the manticore was pure genious. I can't stop giggling even though the dramatic tone. Poor DT isn't near winning the Snail-bowl.
Okay seriously, why this isn't a new chapter of P&P&S ? This story desesperately need an update.
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Tone, mostly. Writing this was a bit of an experiment. And there's pacing. It doesn't go in chapter twelve. And for thirteen, well, the scene would need to play out differently to handle the events from twelve. So this stands to the side.
That was amazing! Great job, I'm in tears now.
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I'm screaming inside, I hope you know this. Because I see this and I feel like I'm being teased right now.
I need chapter 12 and 13 and beyond, you MUDPONY!