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Sparrow9642


I'm a proud brony who reads stuff for a living. I also write darkfics & family-friendly stuff every-so-often. All I can say is, if you plan to read any of my content, happy horrors ;)

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What... The fucking hell. Why do people continue to right shit ( not saying they are bad) like cupcakes and rainbow factory?

7031199 Because people like this stuff. :pinkiecrazy:

7031299 I made the mistake of reading this late, if you don't mind I'm going to go have a sleepless and shitty night.

7031304 Sparrow warned us in the description. :derpyderp2:

WARNING! CONTAINS VERY GRAPHIC CONTENT! IF YOU HAVE A VERY WEAK STOMACH DON'T READ! READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

7031323 stomach. Not sleep. It was a fuck up on my part, didn't see the time. What I do before I sleep ends to reflect in my dreams.

7031368 I warned you. There's a reason why there's a description to a story. I wasn't lying when I said "CONTAINS VERY GRAPHIC CONTENT." Read description next time.

7031323 Thank you, Hinata :)

7031445 I did read the description. And it doesn't affect me while I'm awake but my mind tends to warp things like this to make them worse when I'm asleep. Normally I read this kind of stuff earlier but I had no idea of the time.

To every reader who dislikes this, I don't give a shit. If you don't prefer creepypastas, then why are you even here? Your hate just makes me laugh like Pinkie.

7033647 I have not disliked it but maybe it is creepy pasta fans and maybe they simply don't like the concept.

7034394 Creepypasta fans thrive for this kind of content. The popularity of Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory proves my point.

7035488 I'm not sure if that's a good or bad comment, but I'll take it

7035572 Mixed feelings. I love it and hate it at the same time. I'll just say I 'like' it for now. :)

7035709 Kinda the same for me, but I'm really good at writing horror. I'll just let you know now that this story is going to probably get as graphic as what you read in chapter two. I only did that to add more horror to it, and I think it worked.

I'm intrigued to see how it turns out but Applejack is one of my favourites. I don't like it sorry. :ajsleepy:

7038974 I respect your opinion. It is a very dark story, and if you like AJ, I suggest not reading the rest of this.

7040542 Again. Good or bad? Either way I'll take it


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It was good. I didn't expect AJ to be polite for once, though.

7041646 She was doing it to give him false hope, as you know at the end.

7041075 it's not over yet, still got lots of chapters left.

7041929 Oh I know! Lol this is still good but i've read fics with WAY more gore.

7042328 There's no gore yet, but there will be

7042482 yep i know. I'm going to be putting a lot of Gore into my dislaced fanfic The Greatest Hunter myself.

Oh shit. OOOOOHHhhhh, SHIIIIT.

Why do I like darkfics so much.

7042833 You thought he was gonna go, right? Nope. He's doomed to a much worse fate.

7044759 So, was it good, bad, excellent? You are giving it an applause, but can't really tell.

7048900 Glad you liked it, it was my first attempt at a darkfic :)

Huh. Dark, fucked up, but a good ending.

Can I have that liver with a side gut pie because I kinda starving and I don't think just the main coarse will do.

Well that was surprising, imma go cry now ;-;




It's okay they're happy tears.

I really REALLY enjoyed this horror fanfic you did. Sadly this will be one of those Darkfics I shall only partake in once. I listened to the audio drama while reading the fanfic, since some parts were too low to hear. But it was great nonetheless, the reason I shall not be listening to or reading it again is, unfortunately the sexual scene. The reasoning is I am ace and sex repulsed and not only that but I am biologically female -despite being gender questioning- and my chances of being r*ped are higher. Being r*ped is one of my biggest fears and the scene was too much for me to stomach. But please don't take this the wrong way! You should take it as you succeeded in deterring someone who ADORES the dark side of mlp. I've written my own horror fics called Crimson Bubbles and Misery Magic Junction, both on my old FIMFICTION account that I no longer have access to.

You can read them here if you wish:

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/68799/murder-is-magic-book-one-crimson-bubbles

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72459/murder-is-magic-book-two-misery-magic-junction

So you should really be proud of yourself that you caused such a reaction to me, because normally I don't have much of a reaction to the dark side of MLP.

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Many thanks. This story was designed to be my first impression as a member of the dark side of the MLP fandom, and with that one scene, I believe I really delivered the shock factor, and I even hesitated while writing that scene, wondering if I had gone too far. Now that I see the reactions by the readers, I can see that something THAT shocking was exactly what this story needed.

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I applaud your horrific and wondrous efforts on this Grimdark fanfic! It was a lovely read indeed and I enjoyed it. I might just read it again when I gain enough courage, maybe, if I skip the sexual scene I can probably power through it. Not many fanfics can get to me and I've seen some bucked up ones before! So congrats to you for even slightly disturbing even me, someone who has no problem getting down and gorey and full on terrifying bone chilling horror story telling. I commend you with the highest of regards you have impressed me with your superb story telling!

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I have an edited version of it on Fanficton, where that scene is cut out, and Crimson passes out before anything explicit happens. If you'd prefer that version, just search it up there instead. I'm also glad that you enjoyed it, I'm hoping to get something new going before too long, just need something to click inspiration

This is awesome. Unmarked is still my most fav but this is an amazing dark fic. I just wish I currently had these skills.

It's a shame this story has so many dislikes. I personally enjoyed reading it again after listening to your fanfiiction reading on YouTube. Keep up the good work, Sparrow! :raritywink:

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Heavily appreciated! Thank you for the feedback!

Is that a Saw 3D reference?

I just realized something that ruins every other mlp grimdark: ponies are herbivores, they can't digest meat, it would kill them. Of course, this is the mlp universe so anything is possible. Also, what is peoples problem? If you don't enjoy grimdark don't read it. This is one of the best grimdark ever, very descriptive and detailed!

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Oh my god, someone who actually gets the reason why I put a disclaimer and made it clear that IT'S NOT FOR EVERYONE! God bless you!

Fractured eye socket appears twice on the list. So did he have two, or did you just add it twice by mistake?

Despite Everything, Crimson still got a good ending

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Yes and no. While he escaped physically, mentally he is forever haunted by the events that occurred in the farmhouse. The scars, mental damage, and trauma will follow him to his grave, so it's more of a bittersweet ending.

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