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Midnight Radiance


Anime is my guide, fantasy is my drive for inspiration.

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Spike The Dragon is a friend to the Elements of Harmony. The love he has for his friends leads him down a path that will give him the chance to save his world from a great evil that will erase everything he holds dear.



This is a Naruto/MLP Crossover

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 28 )

And another badass spike comes. So how is FiH going?

Oh and also FIRST

Not bad, just a little rushed and not enough details.

Interesting

Can't wait for the next chapter

I agree with mylaptop. This shows promise but fels rushed. You know i would have liked if Naruto and Sasuke came to equestria with spike

I cant help but to picture him with Tobi's 4th war clothes exept for the mask

When will we have a new chapter

Please Message Me When You Make Another Chapter!!!

Comment posted by Midnight Radiance deleted Apr 1st, 2016

I would appreciate more chapters

When is the next chapter coming out?

Dude i cringed when i saw i was almost at the end of the chapter, do more!!

Please work on this! Its really good!

After the energy display, the shadows then faded on the form it took and from it stood a tall gray unicorn with a unique red horn as well as red eyes with a green cornea and black mane that stopped right below his neck and a black tail. He wore dark silver armor that started from the neck down, only having flesh showing on his arms and the upper part of his legs and had a red cape with white fur at the end that went down his back, only inches from touching the floor.

red eyes with green cornea

Wait, “green cornea”... you mean the sclera of the eye? Because that’s what the white part of the eye is called.

More and if you ran outta brain juice just go back to your sources

it does feel a bit rushed and there were some errors with the pov thing.
But it shows promise to be a good story keep it up i will eagerly follow this.

hmm interesting but i wish spike had a sword or two i just have a hard time feeling intimidated by an over-sized musical instrument and mabye give him a hooded trench coat(preferably black in color) and a face mask/scarf thing(also in black).
Its just a suggestion take it or leave it your choice I don't care either way.
looking forward to next chapter.
BYE!

I want more NOW!

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Wondering if this will continue?
I am pretty interested in it.

I can just see how much trouble Momoshiki is going to cause, just imagine if the Mane 6 try to use the Elements on him only for him to absorb the beam and just twist it into a giant orb of destruction from the power he absorbed from the attack.

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