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I'm a terrible writer ;-; 19 yrs old

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Rainbow Dash is a star athlete of Canterlot High who is pretty much admired by everyone. She has a really big reputation of being the best she is. But this girl has a secret. After trying hard to move on from a break up a couple months back, a huge discovery is made. She's pregnant. Over time, she goes through a lot of physical and emotional trauma. When she's soon diagnosed with hypertension, it's become likely that her and her baby's life is in danger.


THIS STORY IS CURRENTLY BEING REVISED. NEW PLOT, SETTING, AND TIMELINE ( SAME CHARACTERS THOUGH). EVERYTHING IS BEING MAPPED OUT CAREFULLY. REASONS FOR THE YEAR DELAY AND I APOLOGIZE!

UPDATED CHAPTERS ARE EXPECTED IN JULY 2017

Edited by: Gamer4GOD
Cover drawn by me

*tagged "sex" for sexual references. Includes no actual sex."

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 25 )

Dang, that was an evil cliffhanger, poor Rainbow though.

7126963 what happens is in the next chapter. :raritywink:

Thank you btw.

7126970 You're welcome, its a good fanfic, you captured what someone in Rainbow's position quite well, I look forward to the next chapter.

That cliffhanger. :raritycry: Poor Rainbow, I want to be there to comfort her. :fluttercry:

By the way, you finalled submit it.

7127003 yes and I can't wait to finally submit the other chapters. Things get real intense.

Aside from a few grammar mistakes, this is promising and I'll follow to see where it leads. Also, I'm guessing the guys is none other than Brad aka Flash "I'm stealing your waifu" Sentry.

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I can't wait for the next chapter. And I hope there will be a happy ending for Rainbow.

7127020 Maybe, but you think she'd go out with that type of guy?

7127051 He is the master of waifu stealing after all

Hoboy:rainbowderp:

WHAT THE HELL?! Why that cliffhanger?! I wanna know the results! I'm following this one, you've got me hooked!

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Rainbow has already mentioned him as the father.
Frankly, I am a bit tired of the fandom targeting him as the new Blueblood. :ajbemused:

7127518 oops that was a mistake. He was intended but I changed my mind. Just think he it a "too usual" pick is all. Wanted to find someone.....less known.....unexpected.

Five to one that she's pregnant. Hopefully she'll be able to overcome this obstacle.

Crap, a cliffhanger!...oh wait, the chapter's already done nvm :twilightblush:

Great timing on my part I guess, just read all the chapters yesterday and then they suddenly get taken down lol. Guess I'll look forward to the revision.

so it's coming back?

damn shame its cancelled.

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No actually I just got back to working on it ^^

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whelp you answered my question. I really liked it when there was more chapters( again been a while ). glad to see to you updating it and changing it. no doubt it will be great.

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Thank you.....soon hopefully

I am just wondering of you are ever continuing this story? Its so good i will be pretty upset if its abandoned :(
Keep up the good work and i hope you write a new chapter for this!
😭😍💙

You were doing so well. Why'd you cut it off?

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