(Note: This story has been declared by the writer as "non-fanon" but is being kept for scientific and nostalgic purposes.)
When Night Mist goes missing, Sharp Wing and Frazzle Spark make like their detective friend and launch an investigation. Along with help from Twilight Sparkle and some of her friends, they begin to unveil a vast conspiracy that causes Sharp Wing to wonder if he ever truly knew his friend at all.
Special thanks to PixelBoltStroke for providing the cover art. You can check out more of his stuff at http://pixelsboltstroke.deviantart.com/
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This was pretty awesome. Although there were a number of grammatical errors that made me a bit confused. But, it was pretty much a nice story.
And btw i don't think this story has any comedy in it, so, yeah... About that tag...
A solid adventure story. Your interpretation of the "stars" that aided Nightmare Moon's escape was neat. I was a bit surprised that Luna got taken down so easily. (It was Celestia vs. Chrysalis all over again...
) I guess you don't portray the princesses as all powerful goddesses. I would have liked to get inside Nightmare Eclipse's head a bit more when he has his Damascus Road moment and changes his ways. That felt a bit rushed.
I liked your dialogue. A few of the scenes could have used more descriptive paragraphs.
And I caught comedy in it. Maybe not laugh-out-loud hilarity, but I was definitely smiling during some parts.
You get a Thumbs Up from me. This was a fun fantasy adventure story with likeable characters.
[Also, I got here from the Gameinformer website. Shameless self-promotion works!
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The way he's holding the swords reminds me of this.