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Scootaloo and Spitfire have a little chat.

Winner of the Applejack award in EFNW's Scribblefest 2016
Featured on Equestria Daily
Edited by Themaskedferret
Cover designed by Novel-Idea

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 16 )

Rainbow really dropped the ball. Good on Scootaloo though. I enjoyed this.

Could you do a prequel on how scootaloos mom lost her wings?

That last line...

Short, quick, 123 snap and done.

A bit hasty, that's all I have to point out.

Other than that, it's a pretty sweet story that can be seen as a fanon "Friends Forever" issue.

That ending

Guess she learnt something

This was a nice little story. I've wondered how Scootaloo and Spitfire would first interact, and I got it! Here, have a thumbs up.

And that ending...:pinkiesad2: Can you write about how she lost her wings?

Great story! This is actually a concept I've been trying to make work for quite a while; so fie upon you for beating me to it, but you've done a great job making it happen. :raritywink:

Ooh, thanks and sorry :twilightsmile: :facehoof:
I actually started this one about a year ago and never finished it until now…

Never say never, I guess…

Just wanted to let you know I posted a review of this story — and 13 other entries in the Scribblefest competition — over at my blog.

Good luck in the competition! :twilightsmile:

I reviewed this story as part of Read It Later #45.

You can find my review here.

Thanks and (belated) thanks! :scootangel:

Spitfire and Scootaloo hanging out, makes for some interesting dialogue; telling Scootaloo to be herself and sharing her own experience with the young filly.

I didn't see that ending coming... it could be enlightening if you shed some light on what happened to Scootaloo's Mom. Even if you can't or won't add to this story, it gives me something to think about and imagine what actually had happened to her

Great story with a well thought out plot and near perfect pacing (at least in my opinion).
I loved it :twilightsmile:
I rate this 10/10 bravo, BlazzingInferno :scootangel:

Well, that was nice.
I had Idols on my list for quite a while now, and I am happy that I could finally find the time to read it.
All main characters were portrayed perfectly and Scootaloo´s perspective was certainly interesting.
But I at most liked one certain aspect that was pointed out: Commando positions can be lonely. The further up you are, the more distant you become to the rest of the team. With the fairy-tale community Equestria is shown to be, we tend to forget that some ponies might simply be married to their jobs. Spitfire assuming that she doesn´t has the time for friends, that it just is her job to push everypony to their very best, is a nice point of view.
The story hit this issue right on the spot and in addition held some nice growth for Scootaloo´s character. A worthy winner of the AJ Award indeed :twilightsmile: And also the newest story amongst my favorites.

In this sense, a posteriori congratulation and Kind Regards from Canterlot,
M. Quill

This was definitely a touching story.

But it needs a prequel or something where we find out what happened to Scoots' mother.

Adorable Story. You're one great writer:derpytongue2:

Very well-written and thoroughly enjoyable. It was nice to see a conversation between Spitfire and Scootaloo. It made me smile. :pinkiehappy: Thank you kindly for sharing! :twilightsmile:

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