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There is a bedroom in one of the towers of the Castle of the Pony Sisters, superbly preserved under many layers of spells meant to keep it safe and secure, waiting upon the return of its occupant. Decorated in navy, violet and black, it is a safe guess as to whom it used to host in its glory days.

The east-facing windowsill is of no particular immediate significance. Like all the others, it holds objects from a bygone age, relics of past adventurers who found themselves at odds with the Sisters and fell against them. However, upon this particular windowsill rest two nondescript items that differ from all the others in that room. To anypony who were to see them, nothing about them screams that they are from another world. They lay there, safe in their inconspicuousness, silently waiting.

The ship in a bottle and the tricorn hat sit on their windowsill, from which can be seen, with an extremely good eye, the city of Baltimare and Horseshoe Bay, waiting for their master to reclaim them.

Edit - As suggested by the comments I should note that this story will not be up for crossovers with other displaced. Yet.

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Comments ( 50 )

Well time for the rum. *pulls out rum.* Bring out Jack

Yo ho yo ho a pirate's like for me

Great beginning cant wait to read more.

I think I can guess how this will turn out.

"Well, here you go Rainbow! A brand new bottle, not even opened yet!

"Awesome!" She says as she grabs the bottle. "Thanks, Spike! You're the best!"

With a smile, she carefully uncorked the top.

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Miles and miles away in the Everfree, a set of non-equine ears perked up at a certain sound, followed by his nose catching a familiar, pleasant scent he knew all too well. His head immediately turned towards the source, the town on the distant horizon. Eyes set in determination, he immediately set off in a dead sprint towards the source.

JACK SPARROW

I will keep an eye on this for now. We shall see how it goes.... If it will still go, I hope it does.

i love captain jack sparrow and the characters of the pirates of the Caribbean! i hope there alot of adventure and hijinks maybe a few pirates curses or the super natural of old and dangerous!

So, I expect sea turtles will be involved somehow. :moustache: Good start, I liked your characterization of all involved. I'm particularly happy Spike had a scene at least, rather than as just manual labor, and even some background for him. Hope to read more, the crossover aspect sounds pretty interesting.

DO IT! FUCKING POST MORE OF THIS! I CAN HARDLY WAIT!

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
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More?, aye matey I want more, but will it be soo!?

If only my sister who liked Pirates liked Ponies. :ajsleepy: She'd probably love this.

7038591 Get her to read this, it might get her hooked.

And so it begins,

7032826 :rainbowlaugh: This should be in it.

Well, seems interesting enough. However, this isn't a true Pirates of The Caribbean crossover unless this question is asked:

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And this song is sung. And no, it's not Hoist the Colors:

But, I'll be watching anyways. Don't let me down.

I want to see more of this please.

Comment posted by GrumpyKitten deleted Mar 18th, 2016

YES!!! WE NEED THIS SHIT OUT THERE!! :pinkiecrazy:

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WE TREK ONWARD TO CARIBBEAN GREATNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7039736 No, it's not a Pirates crossover unless someone sings this

Seems like people like this. I may just write some more.

Don't be expecting ANY kind of frequent or regular update schedule though

7085347 So long as you keep writing the story I can wait:scootangel:

Infrequent Updates indeed... this hasn't been updated in a criminally long time after such a promising first chapter!

PLLLLLEEEEAAASSSE continue!!! I don't think I've ever been this hyped for a story, but you had me at the mini description before I ever even opened the chapter! Jack Sparrow's is one of my favorite fictional characters of all time and that last bit made start dancing in my seat and chuckle like a madman!

"You look good Jack."

“Yeah” laughed Rainbow, “At least nothing bad can happen with a storybook”.

:facehoof:

The ship in a bottle and the tricorn hat sat on their windowsill, from which can be seen, with an extremely good eye, the city of Baltimare and Horseshoe Bay. And on that particular evening, with the moonrise shining through the east window and the sunset shining through the west, a hand reached down and picked up the tricorn hat.

Welcome back Captain :twilightsmile:

I am looking forward to more :twilightsmile:

YES, SOMEONE MADE THIS! YESYESYES OH FUCK YES!!!!

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That's CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow to you, good sir.

Please more.

Oh yeah, time for some Jack Sparrow action. Captain Jack Sparrow.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5zMdxT14jjc

Comment posted by DisplacedWriter deleted Mar 9th, 2018

Was he Displaced via The Merchant? Also, you might want to include a status in your story description about weather or not your character will be allowing cross-overs with other Displaced. That way, you won't be asked about it. Btw, I meant to click the Edit button but accidentally clicked Delete.

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No I don’t work for the NSA. Besides, I’m British. I refuse to comment as to whether or not I work with James Bond

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What about The Doctor? Because the timing of all of this is weird.

I just read all of 'Jack's' lines in Depp's voice. You're doing something right here.:raritywink:

Oh, I know why you got a shit load of comments all at ones. Someone added your story to a group; who name escapes me for the moment, and we loved the idea of it so we commented on it. Glad to see it back.
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dun, dun dun, dun dun dun,~

Well this was a pleseant surprise, it's good to see this story updated.

The smile broke into a grin as he twirled his hat in his fingers before placing it on his head It seemed to Pitching Moment as if this was something he’d been waiting to say all his life. “You will always remember this as the day that you met, Captain Jack Sparrow!”

Anyone would be excited to say that line :pinkiecrazy:

i originally ready this long ago when you first put it out. now to see it updated makes my heart soar like an airship, looking forward too more

To tell you the truth I prefer my displaced this way. If they're too much in the character It just feels like a regular old crossover.

Also I started following this Story 2 weeks ago thinking I'll just keep hope alive after reading the first chapter. Thank you for coming back man we've missed you!

Also if you need to bounce ideas off someone then I volunteer my fat ass for the job.:pinkiehappy:

But seriously please complete the story if you can because there's been a distinct lack of good pirate stories on this site.

first - how did I miss the update
second -
IT LIVES

Better late than never I suppose..

I hope this comment will remind you that this story exists again. I remember about it randomly after two years so I came back to reread it. Who knows, we may get to see another chapter in this great story.

Starting to think the status is more “Cancelled” than “Hiatus.”

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