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Nasha Rei Kun
Writing, Read, listening to music and video games are my passions. I do enjoy a good story from time to time, and I'm a Spike fan.
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Well, that seems a random crossover, but you do a good job with writing filly Starlight. She hasn't grown into her ways that we saw in the Cutie Map yet, though she does have her hate for Cutie Marks, so it's really easy to emphasise with her. I'm mildly surprised that Obito doesn't divulge much more in his thoughts about the Rikudo Sennin putting him in Equestria than a brief couple of aside mentions about the guy.
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Honesty, if I remember what I wrote correctly, Obito took the chance at a second life. It's not like it happened without circumstance, he was bound to be stuck in a void of oblivion after all.
That should have explained it, a bit.
Also, Obito even contemplates how Equestria is like the Rikudo Sennin's first goal in life, once he understands magic some more.
There's really nothing more to say about the Rikudo Sennin, as I'll quote Obito, once more:
He's got a new lease on life, in an un-war torn world.
He's planning to put the past behind him, something he's never been able to do before because it was ALWAYS in his face. To never forget, but to move forward. That's something he learned near the end of his old life, and it's what pushes him forward now in his second.
Thanks for reading
I liked this story interesting concept
First chapter didnt do it for me. The second one however was really interesting and i enjoy it. Also i have to call you on something. A while back i posted certain idea on the crossover section that i think you shooted down and strangly this chapter remindsme alot of that idea, a village with some of the antagonists(not all) with members of other races living together and even Starlight as second in comand with a narutoverse character as the leader(ill admit my version was more complicated and some stuff didnt make scenes unlike yours).
I enjoyed how the village was represented and the whole son thing really was interesting and surprising. Now i cant wait for the season 6 premier(mostly because of Starlight)
Also i hope to see the NarutoxDazzlings story.
PS:
I have been talking with the author/user who posted the idea of Naruto and Sunset Shimmer being siblings, we talked and sadly he wont be doing the story, i gave some ideas that he liked and well since you are one of the most active users on the Naruto section i thought we could exchange ideas on said story(what you have and what i told the author)
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Yeah, the idea of there being characters from all around, was inspired by you. Though, as you can see, it isn't a village of reformed villains. Just a village with characters whom, honestly, don't have a real home in show.
We know nothing of any minotaur places, and Iron Will seemed like he traveled around a lot, so "Why not?" I thought.
As for the first chapter, it sets a precedence. It gives you an idea on what you're going to be receiving, as well as helps flesh out the relationship between Obito, his past, future and Starlight.
I'm glad you enjoyed the second chapter, though.
Also, I didn't shoot down the idea of it, I said that some of the characters you chose to reform just couldn't happen/weren't really villains. I'm pretty sure, I went on record to say the idea was good and fun, but the way it would happen would need a lot of set up.
(Response to P.S.)
I'm honestly to swamped with my own ideas to do any others. I've got too many stories to actually write out, to consider more. Might need to find someone else brah. I think there's supposed to be a group on here that takes those kinds of requests though.
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Thank You.
7046529 No problem. I know i miself now that i was way to specific with my idea and follows a certain path. Still hoping to see the idea you mentioned on in the first chapter with Sonata/Dazzlings(yeah they are my favorite characters in the series)
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As I said, in the fic, it's a thought in motion. More likely than not, I'd never get around to it, BEFORE I did a FULL Detail Obito Fic. As for how far along that is:
I need to write a Naruto x Derpy fic (Short, hoping it STAYS about 3-4 Chapters.)
Then the FULL Detail Obito Fic (An Obito/The Pie Sisters kind of harem shin-dig. Now THAT is going to take a LONG F***ing time, I kid you not!)
Than the Naruto / Dazzilings fic. Meanwhile, in between there might be some random chapters of AToE being thrown in, because I feel the need, and I'm willing to fall to it.
That was GREAT!
5/5 Spike's for you
One question thou. Why the name Glint? Any specific reason for that name?
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I chose Glint, because I was trying to think of a good in between for Starlight and Obito.
Glint like, "A glint in Starlight", or Glint similar to Glimmer.
Glint like the edge of a weapon, morbid I know, but Obito honestly didn't want his son to be named something too....Weird.
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Thanks. It makes more sence now that I got to see the ninja part of the name.
This story was great to read. Throughout reading, I enjoyed the interaction between Obito and Starlight. Also I was happy to find out what happened when the Main 6 met Starlight. Thanks for the story
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Thanks for the read!
I''m happy to hear people enjoy my stories (I see that Obito avatar
), and be sure to know that I DO have future stories lined up. If you've ever visited the forums for the Naruto crossovers, I've posted at least over 20 ideas in that section in different threads. Along with those ideas, I've given some pretty deep descriptions or written prologue summaries for them.
Once more, thanks for reading, and I hope to see you again in future works.
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Your welcome. And I will check those forums and see about those ideas of yours on the Naruto crossover. (I choose the Obito Avatar because he's grown on me
)
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Have fun going through those.
If someone remakes this and continues it...you deserve a cake.
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My God I wish someone would, it'd be pretty damn awesome.
I would eat that cake with as much honor and dignity, as it would allow.
7381704 If you continue this with a little interlude showing his travels, you get two cakes.
I rather enjoyed this story.
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Thanks for the joy bringing comment, my birdy friend.
You should make a sequel where he meets Celestia and Luna
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It's a thought.
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Thanks for your revieweration.
Awesome Story
Well, this was really nice. A lucky find on my part.