Celestia is a little fed up with all the nonsense being a princess has put her through. So, she decides to conduct an experiment as well as get a little free time... by faking her own death. Let's see what happens!
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This story is a bit simple... but a good read.
I liked the idea and plot but you could have give it a bit more flesh.
This story should have 4-6k words and additional characters like castle staff too expand the comedy of this story.
Its good ... could be better.
It needs 20% more comedy to be Very Good.
7374070 Thanks for the opinion! I just felt like slapping together something for the fun of it, but I might try to flesh it out a bit more in the future.
Story: Approved.
Characterizations: approved.
Chronology: approved.
Adjective count: approved.
Grammar: approved.
10/10!!!
No bad, you could have added a lot more to this however. If you ever want to I have a few suggestions.
7374196 I agree!
Yup, these are the CMC we all know and love!
Nice story!
But in my opinion the ending doesn't fit for the rest of the story.
Hmm this was an interesting story that gave me a few good chuckles. It's pretty simple. I'll give it a like and put it into my liked shelf.
Although just like the first commenter said this could use a good fleshing out. As is this is an okay story. But give it some good old TLC and some good fleshing out and this could be so much more then just a good story.
-BFBL