Lilligold, the kindred shopkeeper from Elmshire, travels to Neighpon to collect some cherry blossoms for her magical botany experiments. With the help of a local pearl diver named Mizuko, it seems like her mission is a done deal.
If only it were that easy.
Featuring fellow OC Slamjam contestant Lilligold, created by the incredibly talented ArgonMatrix who also pre-read this story. Go show them your support!
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oooooh i remember Lilligold
dis gonna b gud :D
Thanks for putting this together, bud. Nice blast from the past seeing Lilligold getting into some of that classic Slamjam wackiness again, haha.
This is decent.
It feels weird that Lilligold isn't somewhat honoured to meet Inari-Sama. Even if she doesn't know much about him, meeting important people usually feels important. It wouldn't be on the same scale as Mizuko, who should be incredibly honoured given how reclusive Inari-Sama is, but she should still be a little impressed. And as far as the kappa city goes, that should be pretty impressive as well, even if also exhausting.
This was alright. The best part was the chapter with Irami-Sama, an inscrutable foreign immortal deity being embarrassed is pretty funny. It could have gone into some more detail as to why Kappas were secret.
Heh. Nice.
The italics here are screwed up. Unless the narrator just suddenly switched to speaking in Neighponese without telling us.
Wow, Mizuko's danger sense is broken.
7305189 Fimfiction screwed up. Looks like it's fixed now.
If this fic doesn't end with a giant, fire-breathing turtle, I'll be disappointed.
. . .
Ok, fine this ending was very cute.