that image at the start is broken

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Yeah it seems to only appear sometimes. I don't know how to fix that sadly. I might just use description in later chapters but I hoped the visual affect would help the readers who are unfamiliar with Monster Hunter.

a congalala is not that scary plus the most dangerus thing about it is its gas

"Hurry its gaining on us!!" We were running through the forest after a very angry wake up call. I had heard Twilight screaming which had jolted me awake before shortly joining her with my own scream of panic. Apparently the tree we slept against already had an owner. Said owner was now charging toward us and it didn't seem satisfied with only getting us to leave.

"Well its either that or a giant lion that's going to try to eat us." Twilight almost seemed to freeze in place, I watched her tense up a clear look of worry across her face. "Don't worry I'm sure it'll be fine, and besides it has to be better than that monkey thing right?" I grabbed her hand pulling her deeper into the cave, hopefully towards something less crazy.

Oh, you poor naive girl.

Slowly making my way towards her, and preparing to run, I gazed inside. What I saw might have been one of the oddest things I had ever seen, and I've seen Pinkie eat fifty cupcakes in one sitting. The center of the room had a torch illuminating a small hollowed out room with different pieces of wood scraps all around. What looked like fireflies buzzed in the air, but what had to be the strangest part were the cats. All of them standing on two legs walking around, a few of them seemed to be holding staffs and some even had small pieces of clothing.

Okay, ya got lucky.