I am the Autistic Writer. I have Autism (Aspergers Syndrome), but that doesn't stop me from writing great stories.
Human Dusk Shine had been uncomfortable around Sunset Shimmer lately. He came to the conclusion that he has fallen in love with her. The next big step is to confess.
Will the confession go alright or will it end in heart break?
For the 2016 Audio Drama Fic Group Contest
Coverart by JaquelinDreamz.
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welllllll dmmmmmnnnn Things just got crazyyyy
I think I will wait for whenever this fic is done to read it, since after reading this first chapter there is going to be a massive emotional trainwreck for everyone involved until it is done.
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Well, this is only a Oneshot to see if i should make the story. Kind of a new style i am making to see if people will like the story.
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Oh you haven't seen the half of it.
haven't i nicccceeee
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OH! Nevermind then. Said incomplete when I read it this morning.
MORE!
( Rarity was so lost in her own romantic thoughts about her and dusk shine, she didn't even think about retrieveing her abandon shoe laying alone on the school floor.... until pinkie comse along and takes it for her own
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If it receives enough likes, i might make it a full story.
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I saw that too and i fixed it.
7017955 okay then
You made a Dusk Shine/Sunset Shimmer fan and a Human Dusk Shine/Rarity fan out of me!
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You are welcome :)
Woah, what a twist! A human verse Dusk Shine x human verse Rarity x pony Sunset Shimmer love triangle, I approve:D Not what I was expecting, which is why I love it:)
Keep up the good work with this story, can't wait to see what happens next<3
My only complaint/question was how did pony Dusk Shine and pony Sunset accidentally kiss in their dance?
Did FanficFanPony allow you to enter into the contest yet? *crossing my fingers* I hope so
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Yea,
:)
Well, It wouldn't matter if i entered or not since you won the contest with the mare who became queen.
This is good, but there was one major problem. When the letter I is by itself in a sentence, it should be capitalized. For example:
I guess that means I can't go to the dance with everyone.
There are a few sentences where a lone I is lowercase. But besides that, it's great.
I think it's great read. I know this is a RarTwilight, or RarDusk in the end, but I really like the DuskSun shipping. I probably relate more with Twilight with her long time denial that she did need friends and fond refuge in her passion to avoided the need to socialize with other. Of course I am probably projecting my self on her. Being a fellow Austistic(also Aspeguer), I think you did a good job expressing the emotions of the characters, I think you understand your craft very well.
I am not normally a big fan of Equestria Girls fics, even doe I love Sunset Shimmer, it was still great. Now if only someone could Sunset and Dusk shipping fic in ponies that would be great.
He started very tender because dual shine was confused and wanted to go to confession but malipreto things with his alternative version, the good thing about all this is rarity has a chance with him. He hoped this cut have a story complete.