Years ago, Hondo Flanks and Cookie Crumbs sent their daughter, Rarity, to Ponyville for a better education than their little town of Swamp Hollow could give her. A few years after that, they sent their youngest, Sweetie Belle to live with her sister for the same reason. Now, with a new school and teacher, Sweetie Belle's parents have come to take her home with them. Will Sweetie Belle have to leave Ponyville, Rarity and all her friend, or can Rarity and her friends convince Hondo and Cookie that Sweetie Belle is better off staying in Ponyville?
Chapters (2)
Love it! 10/10! Have a moustache.
And honestly, they dump her on Rarity for years and go off and leave her on her own so damn much, what were they expecting? You can't just come into your child's life after years of treating her like that and just expect everything to go exactly the way you want it to.
Children grow. They change constantly. They notice everything, especially how you treat them. Children are among the greatest, if not THE greatest things ever to happen to you, and they dumped her on other ponies whenever she became inconvenient. So much of Sweetie Belle's life has happened in Ponyville. Taking her away from it would have been absurdly cruel.
6958699 Wow! That was fast. Looks like you read this about three hours after I put it up. Thank you for the comment. Rarity and Sweetie Belle's parents are pretty dense, actually. They still think of her as the little foal they sent off years ago. They don't realize she's old enough and has been in Ponyville long enough to have built a life. They just want to take her home as if she's just been there a week or two.
Glad you enjoyed it. I will wear my new mustache with pride!
This was really good!
6965620 Thank you, PlatinumPony. Glad you enjoyed it.
Ok. . . Hondo, I don't like to say that but honestly : F**K YOU. I DON'T HAVE KIDS, BUT IF I WERE YOU, I WOULD HAVE SEE THAT SHE DOSEN'T WANT TO GO. Anyways, you're the biggest d**k in history, you don't deserve to be alive, F**K YOU.
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Thomas Dreemurr Prince of Monsters
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PS : By the way, I gladly invite someone/pony to my kingdom. . . but seeing what you do, YOU WILL NEVER BE WELCOME HERE
7357272 Err.... Glad you... enjoyed the story....?..?..?
7396623 oh, yeah... I liked the story but you see how I like Hondo. So hope you wrote more stories but please not with Hondo in them, thanks
7397432 Sometimes the monsters aren't the magic blasting, four hooves, two arms kind from Tartarus. Sometimes they are just like us, but blind to what's right in front of them. It's hard to argue with somepony who's convinced he's right - but isn't. But as you saw, it worked out in the end.
I have no plans to bring back Hondo, he can stay in Swamp Hollow. My next story will be about Ms. Shimmer. Hopefully before the end of the year.
The group gathered around a map and planned their search patterns and meeting points. No one heard the bell ring as front door was opened.
Sweetie Belle walked in looking tired and hungry. She walked up to Spike as he watched the group. “What’s going on?”
“They’re planning a search party for Sweetie Belle,” said Spike.
“A search party?”
“Yeah, she’s been missing…” He finally turned to see who he was talking to. “Sweetie Belle!” He turned to the crowd. “Hey, everypony, look!”
Well, THAT was anticlimactic!
Hondo the mule...