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This story is a sequel to The Adventures of Batsy Fluffentuft the Magnificent

Batsy Fluffentuft the Magnificent's adventure in Canterlot is going about as well you'd expect. (Absolutely amazingly and all according to plan.)

Now, about that shower.

Written as parody-sequel for ocalhoun's Big 250k Contest Please check out the original story. (This one will make more sense if you do too.)

"Echo the Bat Pony 5" vector by Zee66

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Comments ( 18 )

And the thick plottens! Beware, Batsy, this unicorn's a SPY!

Oh my. Batsy is going to a very sweet and wonderful time...once she gets clean, of course. Even though I'm not a fan of sex jokes, I still got more than several laughters out of this story.

I’m being really thoughtful now, my mouth is quirked and I tap my hoof against my chin. “Well, I could use some help. Make me wet too.

You better watch your mouth there, you crazy bat pony. :pinkiecrazy:

“I thought you wanted to use the sex swing.”
I freeze on top of the stairs and turn.
This adventure has just gotten a lot better.

Definitely. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Glad to hear it! I honestly never though I'd write something like this... really. But, hey, I saw the contest and thought it would make good practice. Honestly though, me and comedy? I didn't think I'd be able to write anything remotely funny, so I'm happy you got a few good laughs out of this one. :twilightsheepish:

She was looking kinda lustful at that other mare, I wonder what they were up to. :trixieshiftright:.

-Thanks very much for the reads!

1. When does Magnificent meet Great and Powerful? (As in Trixie)


Thank you.

6981002 In my story! (shameless self-promotion)

1. TodayIWriteFanfics has a neat little tale on that one: The Great, the Powerful, and the Magnificent

2. I will! Hopefully sooner, rather then later. That being once I caught up in my reading and stop being so lazy. Though, it'll not be similar to this. More of the serious or otherwise adventurous nature.

Thanks very much for the encouragement!

BATSY!!! She makes my day brighter, although not literally because she's a bat pony and that totally wouldn't make sense.

Oh Batsy, you bat brained buffoon! I love you! :rainbowkiss:

Thanks! ^^

Yeah, she's quite something, isn't she? :derpytongue2:

Iry this was gold.

Thanks very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

Now this story got Batsy down perfectly! ^.^This really was incredible, and I couldn't have done it better myself. Really, I'm loving everything about this story. (Easy, there ocalhoun... got to be unbiased, got to find some faults...) Um... um... aha! Overuse of italics! (Even though the original is probably guilty of the same thing, knowing my writing style.) Really, though. You've captured Batsy's spirit spot-on, and I can't get enough. ^.^ Oh, and the ending is fantastic, too! Now Batsy knows where to invite Taffy Winkle to after their date tonight. She'll probably forget to inform the mare who owns the place.

A review for ocalhoun's big 250k contest.
Remember to vote for the winner of the People's Choice award!
The rankings and ratings of stories in the contest are visible in real time, and you can see them here.

Oh crap! It's Ocalhoun himself! (Keep it cool, Iry. Just. Chill.) I mean, yeah, I totally rocked Batsy that night. (DUDE!)

*Ahem* I'm thrilled to hear you enjoyed it! I totally didn't read through Batsy's original adventure a few dozen times to get a grasp on her character and how that affects the writing style, that's crazy! If I did that, I wouldn't have used that many italics, right?

Anyway, thanks very much for the review!


First rule of the swing...dont tell Batsy about the swing

Many chuckles well earned. Great job! :rainbowlaugh:

Well when you put it like that....<.<

All bask in the glorious genius that is Batsy Fluffentuft the Magnificent! Truly nopony can resist her charms!

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