Norm De Plume
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YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I can't read this just yet, but consider my excitement and gratitude expressed.
Well now this came as an awfully pleasant surprise. I'm not sure why but I wasn't expecting a continuance for some reason, now I feel like an idiot.
Extremely well done and I absolutely love how you wrote Aria. Thanks for sharing.
Nice reference in the title.
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Thank you!
It originally comes from Buffy The Vampire Slayer, season 6's musical episode "Once More With Feeling". I felt it would fit well here.
6991447 AND WE WILL WALK, THROUGH THE FIRE!!!
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The demon from that episode is so much fun to sing like.
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They went out and got Hinton Battle himself to do that little song & dance.
Sirens don't come equipped with that.
This... This was wonderful. Along with the accompanying fic this manages to build such incredible erotic tension that I found myself unable to tear my eyes away from my phone as I read. I'm being completely genuine when I say I honestly feel like any erotic work I've done just pales in comparison. I would absolutely adore any continuation you might decide to do in this line, but if nothing else was ever written for these two fics I would be so satisfied because they just capture emotion and sensual erotic feeling in such a passionate prose that it stands alone. I love it and I'm totally following you now because anything you write has to be worth something if you can do this. For giving us this and helping my own process I sincerely thank you.
H'YES
Oh my goddess, Aria, don't throw this away so easily! This can only be good for you!
Also. I want flashback as to how Sonata managed that with Flutters.
Okay, real talk for a second... Holy shit, that was INTENSE. This was an entirely different scenario than last one. Intimate in an entirely different sense, the sudden realization that this would be a two-for coupled with the knowledge that they are in similar circumstances made for a heady cocktail of emotion, and kink, and sexy, and feels. No seriously, feels! I felt it every time they saw each other, every little twitch or expression. Aria had no idea she'd be so involved, she was ready to fight tooth and nail. You can tell from the first scene in the spa that she's about to try and shrug this off at the end.
Too bad you can't do that anymore, dearie.
As with its predecessor, this one is full of emotional content and subtle nuance that any good piece of hot, steamy, and romantic (look for it closely, you'll find it) writing should have. This just took it one step further.
May the finale to this trio be as delicious as the first two. And yes people, it's coming. We can't be left hanging now.
EDIT: Immediate addition to library. Elite status.
Wow, all want to do now is bow over and over again saying "I am not worthy." I don't think I will ever reach this level of intense clop with feels and engaging story. But gosh dang it, this was an amazing read. I will be taking what I learned from here and applying it the best that I can.
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If you want to know more or understand the methods used, Google White Lotus East. They're sort of the most informative site when it comes to yoni and lingam massage.
Oh Aria... you know this is inevitable. https://derpibooru.org/1105795
I enjoyed the way the timeline here wove into the first story. With the way it ended, the storyline still feels a bit 'unresloved' - but not in a bad way. Sort of in a 'wanting more' way. Have you given thoughts to future plans here, or since the Sonata part was hinted at, were you intending for this to bring it to a close?
Was interesting to see how the bond between the two in focus here came to be.
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Sonata's up. She's a little stunned from getting rainbowed, so it's going to take some time to get the hamster in her head back on its wheel.
Whoa hey what.
When the fuck did this happen?
A sequel to one of the best clops I've seen in a good long while and I never noticed? Goddamnit all I'm slipping.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Surprise?
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A good surprise, at least.
~Skeeter The Lurker
7035936 It is. It really is. I don't think she'll want to cut the thread just yet.
Especially since Sunset's snark can essentially chew away at Aria's. They'll balance each other out, and not just in energy.
I was hoping you'd write a sequel to the previous one, and this was brilliant. Well done!
Rarity is a walking bug zapper for sirens
Smart move ☺️