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KrspaceT


I'm a fanfiction.net writer and contributor to the Infinite Loops (if not the Saph ones as far as I can tell), who may occasionally jot an idea for here.

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Taking place before the start of Equestria Girls in canon time, and replacing it in and it's follow ups, this story follows the Humane 5, split apart by the manipulations of Sunset Shimmer, find themselves having to reunite.

Following a mysterious event one night, six mysterious lights have fallen upon Canterlot City. Following these lights came a burst of energy that granted several in the city superhuman abilities. Among them are the Humane 5, who find themselves in conflict with a repowered Sunset Shimmer for possession of these lights. And as this conflict reigns, other interested parties find themselves drawn into the conflict.

Story beta edited by Hidden Master at the current time.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 49 )

so far i like it hope there comes more.

Excellent story thus far... can't wait for more...

awesome chapter... i'm confused on how Octavia some how got in on this... either we will find out later.. or not..

poor poor Sweetie belle the feels are real..

welp keep it up.. can't wait for more.

6978553 I thought it was explained in chapter easily enough: Vinyl is a member of an mysterious organization known as the The City. Octavia and Vinyl are virtually always paired as friends or lovers, and thus Octavia is aware of The City.

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ohh my bad.. didn't see it the first time i read the chapter.. after reading your comment and re-reading i see it now... always again keep up the great work and can't wait too see more...

"Purple Light To Form For He Hands"
I Think You Mean Her.

"Just A Few More Moments Patience"
Just A Few More Moments Of Patience...

"runnng"
Running

like i said via PM i would come back and re-read.. i found these mistakes while reading..... and like i said in my first ever comment.. Awesoem Chapter.

I Feel The Omakes Could Stay.. even though i don't really get it.. i doi like it.. what is a Omake?

Hmm If Flutters has the Power to change in to Animal's, While Rarity has her Power Ponie Power, Sunset has the most OP one of them all.. Magic.. i wonder what the other's have... because Rainbow has some Dashie's to go up and try to fight Sunset.. Magic can beat what ever dashie has..

Overall Aweome Chaoter.. keep it up! :pinkiesmile:

7060511 Omake's originate from Japanese media, tending to be comedic (rarely) canon moments using the characters in story or themed about it.

For example, this is an Omake from Black Lagoon, a very violent anime. In it, they put the leading, very violent female cast member in the role of a magical girl, and despite acting like one she still retains her......issues.

Fun fact: her english voice actor is Gilda's.....I'd clip her in english that but her english voice swears like a sailor (fittingly she is one) and is probably closer in sanity levels to Cupcakes Pinkie if she decided to be a modern day pirate.

7060906 ahhh

that's cool and never knew that her NA Voice actor was Gilda's... and wow it must be funnier then heck to see her go off like that..

after hearing that I say keep the Omake's I like them.

what happen next chapter?

7106879Um, you have to wait for the next one to find out

Great Chapter! Keep It Up!

i already know who the Enforcer is.. but i'll stay slient for now...i also know who the Human-Do-Well is... Super speed and super strength..... Classic For Her...

I Wonder what power Celestia has.. or is it just bad luck?..

Welp can't wait for more..

7107850 Celestia is not high on the power priority list. She's just that good at Fight-Blocking.

7107938 ahh.

Celstia is good then.. real good.. again keep up the great work.. can't wait to see more.

Wow! This story is really freaking cool!

Nice chapter, I do love a nice, power-fueled cat-fight!

Hilarious the part with Twilight.

Great chapter as always :pinkiesmile:

Hmm i thought Sunset would go Silver the hedghog on Rainbow.... just grab her with her magic throw her then re-grab her and repeat.. all the while yelling.. "IT'S NO USE!" "TAKE THIS!"

and yes fear my bad Sonic 06 jokes..

also Naughty Naughty Sci Twi... you shouldn't take advantage of knocked out girls.. didn't Pinkie and Dean Cadence teach you better?

7205111 Um, Cadance maybe but Pinkie? How would she be able to teach her?

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Because these is Pinkie we are talking about.. she does things off screen.. we should really set up a Snacks table or something... plus i just put pinkie in there for the heck of it...

Watching them leave like a predator watching fleeing prey, the bully began to debate what rumor would have to be waiting for those three annoyances for school once the weekend was though, before turning her incredulous gaze ot the

Did the end of the sentence get cut off?

Anyway, interesting start so far. The sentient stop light is weird, but maybe you're going somewhere with that.

As for the skin colors, I prefer the canon EG colors. It's easier to remember and there's less chance of people getting butthurt over making the characters a certain real life race or ethnicity.

I have no idea what an Omake is and I thought that part was very jarring. I wasn't even sure if that part was supposed to be in there or if it was accidentally pasted from another fic. So yeah, please leave them out of your FiMfiction unless you're writing a full-blown anime parody.

Other than that I liked the chapter.

Why have you only revealed two lockets and four superpowers so far? I appreciate that you're taking the time to build it up, but OTOH it's been 4 chapters and over 20k words – I'd say that's enough build up. I'm really eager to learn what the other two superpowers are. If I had to guess, I'd predict that Pinkie is the speedster Mare-Do-Well (Woman-Do-Well? Darkwing Girl?). That still lives Rainbow and Applejack (poor girl hasn't even been in this story yet).

Also, we never did learn what the point of the sentient stop light was.

James Hilton's Lost Horizon
Doctor Edward Auguter

Personally, I don't like when EG fics use real world names. I should have mentioned it after “Edward Cullen” in the previous chapter, but TBH I didn't notice it then. But when you drop more and more names, it becomes more distracting.

Even if you ignore the pastel skin colors, “Rarity” and “Fluttershy” are not common names in the real world. It's hard to imagine a scenario in which a society would switch from names like “Sarah” to “Rainbow Dash” in century or less.

I subscribe to the fanon that the human EG world has parallels to the real world, but not all events played out the same way, and everyone throughout history had a different name.

I didn't expect Not-Mare-Do-Well to be Rainbow. You get irony points for that.

Dash understanding the gravity that her action could have is a nice part. And more misteries are piling up.

Great chapter!!

Also Krspace go back to when Dash was talking to Scoots.. you put up what she said twice.

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it's this one.

"It's not like this is anything to worry about Scoots, Sunset knows that I'm just as powerful, if not more so, than she is."
"It isn't anything to worry about Scoots, Sunset knows that I'm just as powerful, if not more so, than she is."

Wow, this is actually pretty interesting so far KrspaceT, it's as good as your Infinite loop snips!

It liiiiiiiives!
I get the distinct feeling it's heavily referencing something beyond the one side universe, but it's still excellent and insane.

I don't know what would be scarier; that Pinkie really did teleport to all of those alt-universes or if she just had too much chemical assistance thinking she did...

It seems that Pinkie's multi-universal insanity is growing... :pinkiecrazy:

Ooh, nice to see you back in action KrspaceT.

I'll read this when I have a little extra time-sadly, responsibilities call ;-;

This is cute, but why did this story go off the rails in Chapter 5?

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By that I assume you mean the post Sunset versus Rainbow fight?

Who says it did? Forshadowing is a thing.

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That and the Pinkie Pie in alternate dimensions chapter. But after reading the newest chapter I think I sort of understand.:rainbowhuh:

Hmm... Interesting story so far... Although I have to question what the heck's going on with the people making super-soldiers. What kind of tech do they have that they could give any old criminal super-speed? Whatever it is, I want 2, wrapped in a bow.

So... Can Pinkie take anything back with her when she exits whatever universe she ends up going to? Cause I have a feeling that Sunset may need a ride... Wait, can she even get out of that universe when the teleportation net's up? Hopefully it rips a different part of reality than what they were preparing for, if only so Pinkie is able to escape...

Rarity placed two plates piled high with the pinnacle of breakfast foods: delicious, fluffy blueberry pancakes. Humming slightly to herself, Rarity measured put a dollop of butter on both pancakes, and then carefully poured just the perfect volume of maple syrup (not that cheap watered down stuff, either: the real concentrated sugary goodness people steal for) first onto one set of pancakes, then the other: just enough to bring an explosion of flavor once the pancakes had absorbed the syrup, but not enough to risk the structural integrity of pancakes under a deluge of maple syrup that would reduce them to nothing so much as an unappetizing mush. With a small smile, Rarity went about chopping up several fresh strawberries to go with her masterpiece.

The italicized words are redundant.:twilightsmile:

"........Darkwing Duck is chasing us man, Darkwing Bleeding Duck!"

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Not sure on the Ground Sloth, might make slow burgers.

I still don’t understand why they’re scared of sunset.

Electric mice and fiery dragons from battles long past, green swordsman and space faring foxes from adventures long ended. Plumbers and dinosaurs from challenges long surpassed, and bears who smashed alongside birds and that was all she knew of their history.

Not even the figures she did not remember made her feel any different, for the life forms with paint guns made her think of summers spent witnessing the orange and the blue due battle with water guns.

I’m guessing she doesn’t know much about video games?

"First the Windigos, then the Hydras, now the Dragons.....one every night since Friday, and that's not even getting into the complaints coming in from Sweet Apple Acres in that same period of time. This can't be.....no, it isn't a coincidence.....but what is it then? Are we dealing with some new gang who doesn't want competition and has some odd morality to them who have something against fruit, or is there a vigilante in Canterlot City?" as he wondered this, his eyes wandered up to the ceiling, only to freeze when he caught motion.

Sweet Apple Acres? Why did they call?

"Human-Beings affected by these strange energies, to the point of gaining unique abilities. While we have witnessed similar phenomenon in the past, it has never originated from the energy connected to Canterlot City before, though different forms of foreign energies have had similar effects on Humans and some of the other forms of flora and fauna found here. We can only assume that this phenomenal is a result of the nature of Humanity and the other species native to this planet as Chaos Lifeforms, which makes them far more susceptible to such mutations."

So this has happened before?

"Now, I must end this transmission. I have been requested to observe a new experiment ongoing in the Garden. We have high hopes for it, though I must also be ready in case it detonates violently. I leave you with this however: first of all be on the lookout. If you were able to pick up the unknown energy, it is very likely that They are also able to see it. We may wish to engage Them to stop their cruelties as soon as possible, but none of us wish to draw in more of the innocent into such a conflict than is absolutely necessary".

Who are they talking about?

School.

A necessary evil: long and tedious but to simply not do it was unheard of. One could never get anywhere without a proper education. To succeed in life, one needed to survive High School, brave the unknown realm that was College, and slay the six headed evil that was student loans. That is how one lived.

That’s one way of putting it.

. While she didn’t know if what was going on was magical in nature and a threat, there was no way in Cerberus’s nine balls she would risk ignoring it and losing her magic as a result after it inevitably came to bite her in the flank. She did not want to lose her magic because she ignored something hidden on a apple farm of all things.

Nine?

"I take it you were just going your separate ways, back home perhaps?" she offered them a way out, an eyebrow raised in a tone that suggested that they very well should take it.

Actually, I was gonna put one of your students 6ft in the ground.

However, assuming that her adventure tonight did not end with her death by magically mutated raccoon, this interrupted fight would resume at some later point.

I hope so. I wanna see rainbow beat her down.

Power Error. Rarity blinked and looked around. Ability uncontrollable at present form, instincts and underlying emotions dominating logic and higher emotions. Initiating further power advancement. A voice emanated from the light, even as it slowed down Fluttershy mid-lunge. The light caused Flutterilla to roar, clutching her head instead of having her arms out in a 'pummel Rarity' sort of way.

The gorilla parts began to dissolve away, leaving only regular, not part-animal Fluttershy.

Power repaired .

The light died down, even as Fluttershy dropped to the earth below.

What was that?

"Sorry Fluttershy......" and of course no one would notice Fluttershy being missing all weekend. Among her old friends there were only a few good parental figures among them, and two of them were dead. Did Fluttershy's parents even realize she had been missing?

What does she mean?

"So, whose next? Trixie? Chrysalis? Tirek? Serpentor?"

Who’s that?

Today, instead of trying to determine what The Catcher in the Rye is truly about, or trying to understand Hamlet, they were going over myths.

That’s sus.

"Some stories in myth are written in part to link them to more contemporary works. For example, when Christians were converting the Norse they noted the stories of the Nordic end of the world and used the rebirth of humanity in tandem with their own stories of Adam and Eve. In doing so, they were able to convert Northern Europe. Other stories connections are more likely coincidental: several recent archaeological findings by the Doctor Edward Auguter finds mention of stories, written at similar times by people as far apart as the Olmec, the early Roman Empire, the British Celts, the Scythians, and Han China talk of similar stories that all originated from the same time: of warriors clad in shimmering light battling threats described in a variety of ways, but all in the same manner: a battle with inhuman creatures. These tales are not uncommon in mythology: see the Minotaur or Grendel. Yet the fact that very similar stories all emerged from the same periods in history....it makes you think doesn't it?"

Not really.

"You really shouldn't drop your books Sunset. I know that algebra is boring and the textbook is like a brick, but no reason to treat it that way. Bricks are nasty for the janitor to clean up after...."

And just like before, the fight was prevented from even starting, as Principal Celestia showed up behind her, startling Sunset.

Celestia, get a life.

"The species I was able to make our own Rosetta Stone out of are a very literal people. They called themselves, in their own tongue, The Ones with 5 Nostrils Who Think. They described everything this way: their star ships translated to 'the transports across space' as it was. So, while I was able to decipher terminology that we know of, like food or asteroid belts, the names of these races are not known. However, they do have descriptions for what I can only guess to be five major powers, and I have managed to translate some other races descriptions for them with some effort, though they retain the shared issue ."

Five major powers?

The man was aged looking, though he wasn't as ancient looking as the Apple family hag. He was in good shape, a imposing looking man in a red jacket with a blue undershirt and jeans.

If applejack heard that, you would be dead.

Sunset stopped talking, on account of the overwhelming urge to drop to clutch her head as she screamed in agony.

Now is your chance to finish the fight, rainbow dash.

On the other hand, her body was barely responsive from the shock, and Sunset could do nothing as she was promptly pounded by fist after fist from Rainbow Dash. All the glowing fists were moving faster than anything shy of a Wonderbolt performance back in Equestria, and spell or not it was painful.

Beat her up, rainbow dash.

"On the other hand, this is a genuine enhanced human in my backyard if her, "Twilight peered closer at Sunset's slowly rising chest and promptly blushed when she realized just how little of the girl's shirt remained to guard her modesty, "uh-hmm, continued breathing is any indication, she clearly survived a tremendous impact into my backyard.. If I take her to my lab, I get a chance to add to my samples, conduct tests, and further science far more than any High School class will ever manage." Twilight brightened. "Oh, and I finally get to put my first aid training to use!"

Something tells me that sunset is probably gonna be begging for her life.

She could understand why some heroes would come clean to their parents, like Jaime Reyes, but Rainbow didn't feel quite ready to do that. The last awkward conversation she had with them had been bad enough, and she still wasn't sure if them 'knowing it already' would help or make it all that much worse.

What conversations?

Sunset's eyes always irritated Rainbow. They were smug, arrogant, always filled with a gleam that said, "I'm better than you, and I always will be. And there's nothing you can do about it." It had always taken enormous restraint on Rainbow's part to not deck Sunset at every opportunity, but there, Sunset's eyes were different. They were tiny cyan pin pricks, fully dilated. Furthermore, Sunset's expression was anything but the confident look she always wore, rather it seemed like it was...

Fear.

Not the startled "oh that surprised me," or the usual "Oh god that's a spider kill it kill it!", but something Rainbow almost didn't recognize simply because she'd never truly experienced it and only had media as a guide. It was true, mind numbing, blood curdling fear for one's life.

I’m not seeing the problem.

"I never thought I'd say this about Sunset of all people... " Rainbow admitted, her eyes staying wide open without a single hint of sleep to them, "But please, be alive in school on Monday."

Why is she feeling guilty.

"That's it, buddy, steal my child's ice cream one more time, and see what happens!" a very pissed off mother called out, followed by the pumping of what sounded suspiciously like a shotgun shotgun.

Dang, the hostility.

Rainbow and Nanosecond stopped for a second. While much of his face was concealed, Rainbow couldn't help but delight in his moderately worried look. She also had a sudden, if mild burst of fear about this neighborhood if the average mother had a shotgun on hand.

That neighborhood ain’t sweet.

And with a deliberate sound effect to mimic a certain cartoon roadrunner, he sped off. Leaving Rainbow in a hole in the wall, hurt in both pride, and various bruises.

That’s what you get.

However, there was more to a race than speed. Yeah, that had thrown her off when she had found that out back when.

What?

Timepunch may be a problem.

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