The Second Chapter is already done, but I'm not going to release it until around 8 or so. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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I really like the idea of setting this story in the EG universe because some things work a lot better in a human setting.

Rainbow being disowned and locked up in an asylum makes a lot more sense in the human world than it does in the pony world where they are supposed to be all about friendship, forgiveness and understanding. Plus I gotta believe magic would have quickly determined if she was actually crazy.

However, some things don't work as well:

1. The person worshipping Celestia requires a bit more explanation here than it does in pony world.
2. Assuming Rainbow is under 18 some kind of living arrangement should have been made for her ahead of time even if it was just shipping her off to an orphanage.
3. Rainbow having F-cup breasts is just so ridiculous I can't even picture it. The other changes to her body are understandable but there is nothing this guy could have done to increase the size of her breasts so drastically. I get the idea is she's more attractive now but she doesn't need such ridiculously large breasts to pull that off.

That said I am interested in seeing where this goes.

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Answering 2: It depends on which country you live, but both the US and Canada laws that allow individuals capable of living on their own from the age of 16, since that's the legal age that a teen can live alone. One of these laws includes Social Services Job Application Aid, Social Income Assistance, and even Schooling Assistance if your grades are high enough.

I know this since I've been living on my own since I was 16 and got kicked out of the house as well. Also, I wrote she was 18, which kinda makes sense, to me anyways. She must have been held back a couple of grades due to her sports life.

Answering 3: According to this > https://www.worlddata.info/average-breastsize.php Website. THE AVERAGE BOOB SIZE IN THE US IS F!

F

Yeah, the size makes sense due to the obesity problem, but come on! It's not fair!

Also, all girls in my family are E-cup and perfectly fit and healthy. So, bleeeeeeehg

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Answering 1: Soooooooooooooooooooooon

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I get that, it's just that with Rainbow it's really hard to picture her with that kind of chest. Even in the stories that give all the girls supermodel bodies Rainbow usually remains the smallest both in chest and height, to match the idea of her being the speedy athlete. It's just really hard to picture her the way you have her here and like I said she doesn't need a large chest in order to be considered attractive. That's just me though.

Also, I wrote she was 18, which kinda makes sense, to me anyways. She must have been held back a couple of grades due to her sports life.

The school was another thing I forgot to bring up. In pony world, it makes sense she could pick up here life after 3 years locked up but here it's a lot more questionable. It seems unlikely she's kept up in her education so it seems unlikely that she could just jump right into High School no problem especially if she's already 18. But you might cover that problem later for all I know so not a huge deal.

I'm not sure if the numbers make sense since I'm not sure you can continue in High School once you're over 18. But again you might already have an idea for this so I won't worry.

The life of the girl I've stolen is tarnished, and I plan to fix it! All I need to do is wait for the portal to pony Equestria to open, go in, find Twilight Sparkle, and with her magical connections. I can figure out where Rainbow Dash's soul went, and return it back to her body! But before that, I need to repair Rainbow's reputation, make friends with the human-six, all the while juggling school, work, and improving her grades! It's a foolproof plan! I've even factored in Sunset Shimmer. She'll become my best friend if it's the last thing I do!

So he’s not gonna expose or punch sunset?