You, sir, are a master, and I humbly bow to you. Somehow I just figured that was going to be Max's reaction. He seems rather oblivious to Dust's advances. Poor dude.
Lovely art work, as always. Not to be nit picky, but did you forget her eyeshadow? Beautiful dress, and the shade goes with her complexion very well. Have to agree with Max, there is something a little more alluring about a mare in a shear skirt.
Can not wait for next chapter. Hope Max isn't an ass and piss off Dusty.
You wonderful and glorious goob you, good lord this was an awesome update! Frigging Lightning, looks so freaking pretty man, I love how you drew her, hehehe I love it!
Awesomely done man, awesomely done once again! One day... when I am rich... I will throw money at you... just cause.
Oh yes PussPuss, you brilliant bastard, doing best pony immense justice again. Short or not, that chapter as well as the amazing art was 100% worth the wait
Nice chapter man, but I have one question for you. I know you have a smut version of this picture, I've seen your works. You can't hide it from me forever!
You're fine, Puss. I haven't actually forgotten about this particular story. I do, however, get some stories universes mixed up with others, and catch myself before commenting something silly and having to redact it with "Oops, wrong AU, lol," though, so having something come randomly into the plethora of stories and AUs I read is always welcome Keep up the good work!
Lightning looked pretty good, and it was the next best thing that could have happened, either her or Moonshine....that was what I was thinking about his date.
7145981 You're quite welcome man, you deserve such praise! Perhaps you are kidding... or perhaps you are not... ehehhe *readies future rich self's wallet*
7146000 Dude, you're great. Don't worry. I lost my job and need to job hunt again is what's up. Anyway, this chapter is great and was worth the wait, it's a cute and rather enticing story
7145981 No need to feel bad man, I've got infinite patience for both an author as good as yourself and for a story featuring best pony so heavily, not to mention this chapter is such a damn tease
I know, I'm sorry. I'll do my best to get the rest out soon!
You hush! I was only teasing. Your works are worth the wait. And this was a nice wind down chapter after the long day I had. So, no more beating yourself up.
Nah, she wasn't wearing any.
My bad, I reread that part. Eyeliner... Goofy brain read eyeshadow. It was a really long day.
Omg, dude......How....? Just.....what? Lol, for some silly reason, I had it in my head that this whole story was supposed to be about a human and Lyra. Why did I think that? I spent the whole time until she was at his door wearing a sexy dress wishing it would be her but for some reason convinced it would be Lyra. Lol, well now that tells me I was right about her seeming oddly flirty for a mare who wasn't into males. I'm seriously going to love reading this story!
Don't be too hard on yourself. Worst thing would be you pressure yourself too much and lose the fun in writing the story. THAT would be a real shame because your story is awesome. I'm glad I was able to enjoy more of it.
Hooray, it continues! If you really want to add clop btw, please either mark the chapter containing it or make a separate fic. I'm just here for romance and stuff.
Look at that! It finally continues!
When's clop tho
That image gave me a wingboner. Goddammit, Pusspuss.
Pusspuss, was this entire story an elaborate set up to draw a small horsey in a adorbes dress?
Yeah, the scarf was definitely not a wise choice. Great story, though!
I love Lightning's dress!
Pusspuss you continue to be amazing with this story You are definitely one of my favorite people in the word
must ...not ....clop to beautiful pony art
Calm down there, Spike...
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Can't wait to see how long it takes Max to wrap his head around this.
A teaser chapter? A bloody teaser chapter?!
You, sir, are a master, and I humbly bow to you.
Somehow I just figured that was going to be Max's reaction. He seems rather oblivious to Dust's advances. Poor dude.
Lovely art work, as always. Not to be nit picky, but did you forget her eyeshadow? Beautiful dress, and the shade goes with her complexion very well. Have to agree with Max, there is something a little more alluring about a mare in a shear skirt.
Can
notwait for next chapter. Hope Max isn't an ass and piss off Dusty.omg! it was lightning!? i totally thought it was chrysalis, guess im out 1 internet cookie
Whelp I know what I clopping to tonight!
You wonderful and glorious goob you, good lord this was an awesome update! Frigging Lightning, looks so freaking pretty man, I love how you drew her, hehehe I love it!
Awesomely done man, awesomely done once again!
One day... when I am rich... I will throw money at you... just cause.
Keep it up!
I knew it was lightning dust from what she told him to spesifacly wear. Relly great story so far. Keep it up.
Oh yes PussPuss, you brilliant bastard, doing best pony immense justice again. Short or not, that chapter as well as the amazing art was 100% worth the wait
Nice chapter man, but I have one question for you. I know you have a smut version of this picture, I've seen your works. You can't hide it from me forever!
You're fine, Puss. I haven't actually forgotten about this particular story. I do, however, get some stories universes mixed up with others, and catch myself before commenting something silly and having to redact it with "Oops, wrong AU, lol," though, so having something come randomly into the plethora of stories and AUs I read is always welcome Keep up the good work!
OMG WHAT A TWIST!!!!
MMMOOOAAARRR YOU BUCKING TEASE! MMMMMOOOOOAAAAARRRRR
Can't wait for the next chapter.
-Ru
That silk wrap just looks perfect for a pegasus' wings.
Lightning Dust looks so adorible in that picture...
Lightning looked pretty good, and it was the next best thing that could have happened, either her or Moonshine....that was what I was thinking about his date.
I'm so glad this got updated. I haven't been having a good week.
For a holiday scarf it isn't tacky at all, it's kind of cute. With the dress though? She should be shot.
Also Puss, I had to wait A WHOLE DAY for this to update, if you insist on speeding up how fast I get the chapters than I don't think I'll complain.
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Oh fuck, not this again! It's cumming dammit!
7145060
I'm sorry! I thought I should you it forever ago.
7145113
You're welcome.
7145116
Ummm... yes.
7145139
I know! It's so bad! But it's important to the story!! I had to draw her with it.
7145196
Thank you!
Man and I was wondering when the next chapter was coming out. I was able to get two fics out between this. TWO FICS, and I am lazy as fuck.
Totally made it up with Dusty's pic though.
7145205
Thew whole world? But... there are so many people in the world. Thank you!
7145247
Dooooooo it!
7145252
I know right?! I can't believe it was Lightning! lol
7145296
I know, I'm sorry. I'll do my best to get the rest out soon!
You don't know the half of it, but they will get to talk about that on the date, lol.
Nah, she wasn't wearing any.
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I know! I was shocked.
7145381
But... The smut is one more chapter away.
7145407
Oh man, thank you! That's quite the complement. Give me your money now! jk ... or am I?
7145439
I'm glad you think so! I felt so bad for taking so long on this one.
7145459
I wish I did have a smut one, but I don't. I'm sorry!
7145535
Haha, I mix stories up a lot too lol. I'm glad you like my stuff so far!
7145420
Good eye.
7145641
Right?! Ir's crazy man!
7145671
I'm trying!
7145711
I agree.
7145703
Thanks! I thought so as well, lol.
7145773
I kind of want to add Moonshine... but we will see.
7145799
Oh no. I hope you're okay, and I'm sorry this chapter wasn't longer.
7145860
I agree! And so does Max, lol. The scarf is important though and there is a reason she's wearing it.
7145959
I know... it took me way to long.
Why I hope the date gose well and hop her dad don't get mad
7145981
You're quite welcome man, you deserve such praise!
Perhaps you are kidding... or perhaps you are not... ehehhe *readies future rich self's wallet*
7146000 Dude, you're great. Don't worry. I lost my job and need to job hunt again is what's up. Anyway, this chapter is great and was worth the wait, it's a cute and rather enticing story
7146000 I don't know about most people but I have an article of clothing that you could almost call comfort clothes. I wear it whenever I'm in a funk.
Forget?? About a Puss tale! PERISH THE THOUGHT! Good work is worth waiting for!
7145981 No need to feel bad man, I've got infinite patience for both an author as good as yourself and for a story featuring best pony so heavily, not to mention this chapter is such a damn tease
7145966
You hush! I was only teasing. Your works are worth the wait. And this was a nice wind down chapter after the long day I had. So, no more beating yourself up.
My bad, I reread that part. Eyeliner... Goofy brain read eyeshadow. It was a really long day.
a super good chapter and the art work just poops the detailing is spot on.
Great update, more Puss more.
..............
Omg, dude......How....? Just.....what? Lol, for some silly reason, I had it in my head that this whole story was supposed to be about a human and Lyra. Why did I think that? I spent the whole time until she was at his door wearing a sexy dress wishing it would be her but for some reason convinced it would be Lyra. Lol, well now that tells me I was right about her seeming oddly flirty for a mare who wasn't into males. I'm seriously going to love reading this story!
Don't be too hard on yourself. Worst thing would be you pressure yourself too much and lose the fun in writing the story. THAT would be a real shame because your story is awesome. I'm glad I was able to enjoy more of it.
7146000 If you should do that, please allow them a seperate date as well
Yes awesome job PussPuss awesome art as always too
Hooray, it continues! If you really want to add clop btw, please either mark the chapter containing it or make a separate fic. I'm just here for romance and stuff.
Commence read.
A good appetizer, I suppose?
A lovely image of Lightning.
Not to await progress.
PussPuss who's that? All jokes aside great to see this continue, I have said before quality is worth waiting for and your stories prove it.
7146026
Yeah... What's her dad going to think about all this?
7146054
Oh man... That sucks big time. I hope you find something soon.
7146131
I hope no one forgets about me. Thank you though! Glad you liked the small little chapter.
7146174
I know. its a big tease of a chapter, but it was the best place to split it up to give you guys something.
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It's coming!
7146452
Hehe, how did you get Lyra?
Well, I hope you like the rest that is to come.
7146628
Well, writing is still fun, its just hard to find the time and it takes me so long.
7146652
Will do.
7146937
Thank you kindly!
7147112
Yeah, I'm going to make the clop skipable, so no worries. The chapter will be labeled and you wont miss much from skipping the sexy stuff.
7147656
Thank you! I'm glad you think so!
7147761
Probably thought that because the last two stories of yours I read were Lyra and BonBon with the human Chris.
7145981 Liar! We all you know have it hidden somehwhere! Tell me your secrets! *pulls out rolled up newspaper*